SwaRon OS: Love doesnt have any counts (note-PG14)

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: tanharockks
It was nice
but
expression part cud have been better
n
thnx for the pm

thanks for liking it... i will try and be more expressive when i write something next time...

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

great one.. i love your works...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95
long and nyssh os
love has no counts is been totally justified with this one short of your
beautifully written
keep writing more :-)

regardx
ARUBA

thanks for liking it...will try to write more surely...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tan-ya
Yr...dis os has touched my heart...:')
It was awsome... 👏

thank you thank you so much...i am glad that i was able to give you a pleasure read...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
great one.. i love your works...<div></div>

thank you so much reading and liking it...

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

It was a long and descriptive OS Maddy.. I liked the concept very much...luv shuld always get a second chance and that there is sumeone surely destined for u sumwhere...that is what a soulmate is- u can find sumeone who luvs u for ur luv, ur fame or any other reason...but to find sumone who luvs u unconditionally and without expecting anything in return...selflessly...is a rarity and aaj ke zamaane mein Swayam jaise log kahan milte hain

Yaar Maddy it is ok to b a little more romantic bcoz u write feelings very objectively I feel... I mean thoda aur expressive ho sakte ho ...u hav it in u to write so...otherwise it was a fine tribute

Har baar bolti hun but phir bhi once again gud luck for ur exams

Edited by meevee - 12 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Interesting piece of work with lot of scope in this story to be continued. Some really well crafted dialogues and sequences. I thoroughly enoyed reading it. The theme or the plot line which you chose for your OS was really good andd I liked the way you approached it. A fine piece of work. BTW Rey and Kriya ko jab pata chalega ki dodno saath hain to they will die of heart attack 😆.

P.S - Best of luck for exams