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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Written so well!

Would have loved more after, but I understand that's how you wanted to leave it! 😊

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

That was amazing.. Though Im confused abt what happened at the end.. He came back.. But was he already married to Lavanya or he didnt? 🤔

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Damn, why did it have to end? Why did you stop? Please write a third part.

This captivated me to no end. I was mesmerized by your words, the magic in them pulling me away from my own world and into their world.

Beautiful but different concept, and really liking how you took it forward. It would be really good if you could continue it, it doesnt feel complete, somehow! Maybe because neither of them have found a closure, or i dont know. I am not the one who always wants them together, but its just that it feels incomplete. Like they are incomplete without each other.

Its beautifully written, and I apologize for the delay in comments. I have been busy.

Thanks for the PM

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Oh I just read the note, I completely understand your wish to leave it here.

Must say, this is one brilliant piece of work.

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

That was just utterly BEAUTIFUL! And I loved the way you ended it...😃

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Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Very beautifully written os. So emotional .

Loved it. Thanks for the pm dear.😊

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Vanhi

@vanhi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Hey Masam,

This is a completely different wave in an ocean from The Splintered Rainbow.

I fell in love with your words and style. I can just imagine them in front of my eyes. Arnav is stalking Khushi... that's awesome. A business tycoon fell for a simple university going girl. Common yet Unique...

And I love the end, where you stopped it. It looked more natural to me, and added much beauty to the story. (I felt it in that way)

Thanks for giving us this piece of work.

Looking forward to read more and ore stories.

Take Care...!

Vanhi

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

I really loved the writing style!!! Stalker!!!

Cool!!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

OMG...I have no words..

This was just beautiful...and heartwrenching...and comforting...

The optimist in me would like to think that one day they will move beyond just gazing and watching each other...one day when Khushi has seen the world perhaps...

Exquisitely written!

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Though I am not a big fan of"maybe" endings...I loved this one to bits.

The uncertainty was painted with a new hope and something good and through out the story I felt as if I was there. I felt everything. From Khushi's nervousness to Arnav's dark and magnetic presence.

It was beautiful.