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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

this ts was less a story and more like...poetry...a painting... Loved this magical story...

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Wow that was really beautiful loved thanks for the pm.

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Mariam

@Mariam.Ejaz

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

That was beautiful!! I totally loved this!! ❤️ much more realistic then the usual fairy tales :)

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mohini_agarwal

@mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

And once again, you've done a wonderful job, Masam! I truly admire the way you portray everything so perfectly be it small or large. I'm looking forward to reading more of your works :)

-Mohini

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Awesome Two shot !!!👏👏

I guess words will fall short for this work of yours !!

Very unique concept...Moreover sometimes such incidents do happen...dats why I really loved it...

I m in those minority grp who liked the ending...because...as u said the whole sole of the story is in the ending...😳😳

But I am confused dat what happened..did he leave Lavanya or not???

Ur writing style is really unique & fabulous dat I feel so connected & glued to the story...👏👏

U really one of the most talented writers dat I have seen in IF !!

Continue rocking..⭐️⭐️

Will be waiting for ur next OS !!😊😊

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

awesome ts..buut plzz do reconsider of conti it

soo beautifully written

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Christine

@westindian

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Please, please write more, brilliant story.👏

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masam

@masam

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: rimzu
plz update soon...

It was a two shot, I'm not continuing it further. Will be back with another OS soon :)

Edited by masam - 13 years ago

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The Daily Rush

@TheDailyRush

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#249

I always know that I don't have to finish reading before I "like" your post.

seriously doctor maam 😛 I wish to write like you one day! simply amazing.. you have a way with words.👏 I envy your writing skills . but then I couldnt ecpext anything less froma doctor lol 😆

if you ever get time, PM me your secret..seriously

part two left me all warm and fuzzy inside...and the ending 😭

I feel breathless lol...holy!

Edited by rushi - 13 years ago

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ducky_anne

@ducky_anne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

I hope there's a continuation to this! Maybe as a sequel? It was..beautiful. He's trying to be a good person, and yet he hurts her more than he ever wanted to. I hope he knows that!

Edited by ducky_anne - 13 years ago