Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

LilaUK

@LilaUK

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Beautiful! Loved the stalker aspect!

Quote

lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

I love myself for my stalking skills :D

You write so well. I feel as if I am in the store, I am on the street, I am in the car.

I had a feeling that he didn't smoke warna smell aati :D

Pick up and drop, but hardly talk. Become each others' habit.

Khushi is scared of her feelings. Despite of spending so much time with him, he still is a stranger for her.

If Khushi were not a virgin, what would have happened?

He was suppose to be with La, but he continued to be with Khushi. Good he left her before they went too far.

Khushi was heartbroken ;( But then she is Khushi :D She is ready for a new life but then he again comes.

But now what?

You are not allowed to stop :D

Edited by lazyleaves - 13 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

r

Edited:

Masam you have not written but painted a story. The words are colors. Vibrant and majestic.

But the ending masam...

I have my own perception of the ending. I wish I knew if my perception is the same as yours.

My sister saw to it I got to res second. 😊

Thanks for a beautiful story. What's next?

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 13 years ago

Quote

desipwincess84

@desipwincess84

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

RES...

Masam where do you come up with such unique ideas...honestly I truly loved this update. I was so charismatic. I felt like I was living Khushi's pain when she didn't see Arnav at the end of the street and then finding out he is getting married but then love her happiness at the end when he did show up, to let her know he would always be there for her.
This two shot was so life like, I really don't know how to put it into words but i just absolutely love this one.
Your writing truly does capture the reader into thinking they are living the story and feeling all the emotions of each character.

Thanks for the PM
Amazing work👏👏👏

Edited by desipwincess84 - 13 years ago

Quote

......

@LumosMaxima

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Loved Loved loved It Masam. 😊

You are such an amazing Writer Dear. Woaaah..The concept, the way you "Play with words"..Absolutely Mind-blowin. LOved it completely. Aesthetically Written! 👏Thanks for the PM. 😊

Edited by Adorable.SARUN - 13 years ago

Quote

..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

That was beautiful!!!

You bring out all emotions so beautifully with your words!!! Great writing from you!!!

I totally loved this!! ❤️

Thank you sooo much for the PM!

Edited by raomedhz - 13 years ago

Quote

Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

I want to write more, I really do...but...will leave it at...brilliant.

Quote

Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

👏The stalker concept was great... Totally different concept... Enjoyed it very much... You put an end @ correct situation...👏

Edited by arshy4ever - 13 years ago

Quote

Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Wonderful!!

I just wish i had a stalker like that!!

good work!!

Quote

Razz22

@Razz22

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

wow... pls dont tell me that was the end!! 😭 its sooo nice! i hope u change your mind 😉

Quote

1 ... 12 13 14 15 16 ... 27

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

Chapter 1 (In Every Birth, Find Me) The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya,...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

Chapter 1 (Late-Night Confessions) Munni sat cross-legged on her small bed in the staff quarters, staring at the cracked screen of her...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

Inspired by the timeless Bollywood tale "Raja Hindustani", this story unfolds in the snowy embrace of Manali, a free-spirited taxi driver and a...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

A "What-If" Rumya Continuation Story — imagining what could’ve happened if Soumya never left Ishqbaaz and her relationship with Rudra was...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 8 months ago

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Character A has body image...

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE* - Page 14

Related Topics

Explore Topics