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LilaUK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

That was absolutely beautiful! Confused by the ending. So did he marry Lavanya or not?? Why is he back? So many unanswered questions

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shree10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Hi It was wonderful update. I kinda of didn't get the ending I was almost in tears. Wish it had been clearer and happy.
So what next? 3 shots?

Also could u please explain the title of this TS?

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

simply amazing..loved it...beautifully penned down

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sakthi25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

woahh! I always admire your writings...

Stranger? Stalker? Arnav, I love him in your writings who is always potrayed from a different angle...

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applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Brilliant !

Can u please write another part to it!:D

Beautifully written !

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Beautifully wriiten down!! Just amazing man the feelings the emotions all expressed aptly!1 N no wonder its that way bcoz it cums frm u :) U never leave the opportunity to say there she goes again another whole new theory n new arnav khushi and not the usual one!! Amazing as usual!! one cud feel the emotions f d gal bein stalked n den when she gets to knw all was jus for a while n it can neva move n stay d same! ANd d best was when she came out n out f habit saw d the road cross n den sat back on d bench!! I jus loved the line dear!! :)

Cheers for the pm :)

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 13 years ago