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Posted: 13 years ago
That was absolutely beautiful! Confused by the ending. So did he marry Lavanya or not?? Why is he back? So many unanswered questions
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi It was wonderful update. I kinda of didn't get the ending I was almost in tears. Wish it had been clearer and happy.
So what next? 3 shots?

Also could u please explain the title of this TS?
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply amazing..loved it...beautifully penned down
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Posted: 13 years ago
woahh! I always admire your writings...

Stranger? Stalker? Arnav, I love him in your writings who is always potrayed from a different angle...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant !

Can u please write another part to it!:D

Beautifully written !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautifully wriiten down!! Just amazing man the feelings the emotions all expressed aptly!1 N no wonder its that way bcoz it cums frm u :) U never leave the opportunity to say there she goes again another whole new theory n new arnav khushi and not the usual one!! Amazing as usual!! one cud feel the emotions f d gal bein stalked n den when she gets to knw all was jus for a while n it can neva move n stay d same! ANd d best was when she came out n out f habit saw d the road cross n den sat back on d bench!! I jus loved the line dear!! :)

Cheers for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
It is b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l !!!!!!!!!!!! Subtle but deep emotions expressed in very poised manner!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
what the...
y is arnav marrying la
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.. It was different and awesome.. Emotional roller coaster.. Does that mean he would always be there to watch her but marry someone else..?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Do you know that you're an amazing writer ?! You stories makes me fantasize, not every writer is blessed with this trait. Keep up the good work. :)

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