Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE*

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amritab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Nicely done ! Will Khushi act on her newfound knowledge? I do hope to find out so I do hope you continue this story!

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Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Captivating and enthralling, Masam!!!

I loved the way you penned down her reactions...well done!!!

So he is smitten by her ( and her simplicity) and hence frequents the store...not astounded, cuz, I have seen it happen ...

Nice to read, how you added her skimming through her Economics text betwixt serving the customers...it was realistic..

Mr Raizada became tenacious and made a move...poor Khushi . his husky Hi!! must have set her heart beats, galloping...

And, Khushi was cognizant that her stalker would be Mr-molten-eyes...Ah!! a woman's intuition...

Can't wait for the sequel...and thank you for the PM...

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darya20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

waw superb update loved it sooo much

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__blossom__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Wow that was different...
A really good read...
Loved it!

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annab

@annab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Brilliant Masam...loved the characterisation...Arnav is attracted towards her ...and khushi's dhak dhak has started now...Bring on the next part hun...😊

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oceanssea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Wow,this is one fabulous two-short.

Read the first few lines and had already fallen for it.

Very,very eagerly for the second part.

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Sadaf Rizwan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

wow! wow! wow! that was simply epic
totally different
loved reading it

continue it soon

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nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Oh wow. That was intense. And thrilling. Loved the concept!

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desipwincess84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Every story line you come up with is just absolutely amazing...I love this one...It felt so real like a story you would hear about in real life...it was soo intriguing...can't wait to read the next shot :) and thanks for the PM😃