Two Shot : Set The Fire To The Third Bar +NOTE*

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pavi1

@pavi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

awesome part...
beautifully written. great work.

thanks for the pm...

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

I have no idea what to say.

That was, well, simply amazing!

I can't even explain how enticing the whole thing was!

Great job!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Speechless!!!

It was a roller coaster ride cuz of the array of emotions...

I loved how she broke the ice and queried about the stalking and his response blew me away...cheeky guy... wait and watch - seems to be his tag line...

Khushi's monologues were hilarious...insufficent change, defective cigarettes...only her gray cells could concoct such weird ideas..

And, then, the slow progression of their relationship...adored it...

I felt Khushi's anguish when the duo made a public appearance..it was palpable..

And, the end was scintillating...

Innumerable Hugs for such an awesome update, Masam!!! And, thank you for dropping a PM..

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Masam, what an amazing update...seriously girl you just write sooo beautifully... I am just in awe...

Please do continue...

one more thing, please update the page number for the update...that helps...

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: shree10
Hi It was wonderful update. I kinda of didn't get the ending I was almost in tears. Wish it had been clearer and happy.
So what next? 3 shots?

Also could u please explain the title of this TS?

The meaning is so rich that I can practically go on and on about it :)
It is basically a summation of their desires. Due to their problems, their emotions are a hindrance to them, keeping them apart and here 'fire' is taken as passion as well as destruction. Their emotions can destroy and combust them at the same time. 'Bar' here comply distance and expectation.
Their distance, expectations, hopes have combusted and destroyed them at the same time just because of their reconciliation and separation.

I hope you get the idea :)

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Hey,it was a surreal and beautiful story.

Great writing.👏

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Brilliant Masam.

I loved the second part 2 .

So what next?

Will u continue?

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

i swear u need to beleive me...wen i started reading..only d page of d update was filled wit comeents...n nw m soo far frm d update page...d way u write was so interguing...i read n re read...n read again...cant get enuff of reading dis...

n u must knw i havnt comented dis big in a long tym...so plzzz pkkklzzz write a epilogue or write part3 plsss...d ending was abrupt...

n i cant get enufff of reading dis...u neeed to write nxt part...plsss

goin bak to read it again...

n yes ill do katti seriously if u dint continue

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Awsome Update..loved it...thanks for the PM...

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

That was just so mesmerising...how are they going to live their lives separately after that connection? How can he marry someone else and live a full life with them and how can she ever form another meaningful relationship?!!! The most important part of them will always be given to each other!! Mindblowing!