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@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#311

dat was an beautiful end..
it made me cry,
superb work..
loved reading it..
thanxx for d pm.

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Holly heaven, i loved this story a lot...u r an amazing writer AT.

Im not a sadist but i wanted the ending to be like this kushi far away from him ... i expected same to happen in serial if arnav left her in mandap like that. but thank god he didnt do it.

back here, AT, u have plotted emotions in wonderful way...my heart still pains for both. Arnavs emotional break down in front of anji and buaji was unexpected and lovely. Breakdown of the ASR face in front of his two dear ones and public too...

Waw, mom left a letter for Anji too...the things she wanted to share with her daughter, the facts only a daughter can understand...a lady who loved her husband, though he betrayed her doesnt want their children to hate him. She know if ever Chottey knows the facts he will never forgive his father, but her daughter can understand and needs to know...if ever teh truth comes out she should handle them...a mother who had foreseen the future... lovely

Buajis thappad...but he know its bse of teh love. But too late.

Three years, no one could trace her out...hes alone... without her but always feeling her presence all round...

No shes not dead...its police who assume it...we wont let her die.

She s safe in other part, safe away from all sufferings...away from Shyams dirtty eyes and Arnavs false promises which hurts her...Shes happy in her life ;-)

I love the authors note...mainly teh way u discribed the banner...awesome.

Oppps its too long. i didnt mean to write this much...i cant stop myself too for i loved this story so much.

Thanks AT

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

I am going to die... and curl up in my bed and cry.

speechless.

I am happy for Khushi. Always will be. Are you planning to do a sequel?

-V

Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

wow!

Thats all i can say right now! This is was a really good SS! You brought out arnav's hearbreak and anguish to light beautifully! I am ust in aw of your writing skills!

This was a heartbreaking love story...and you did it justice!

Loved it!

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

That was amazing Rae
I loved the last part more where u wrote cases n all
For myself I hope inspite of case being Arnav is still searching for her and the significance of banner n all u gave was excellent I loved this SS great work

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crazyweird

@crazyweird

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

That was sad bt very very well written

Awesome

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

heart wrenching update, nevertheless loved it

I guess Arnav in your story deserves this kind of an end.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

🥺 The ending broke my heart.. Arnav got a much bigger punishment for his mistake..😒

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

this chapter made me cry...the words the emotions everything sooo perfectly put together...a perfect ending...i really am a fan of tragedies and for that reason i loved this ss...you have done far more justice to both the characters and the story than anyone can ever do...fabulous work..magnificent writing and of course flawless interpretation...\

the 7 chapters for the 7 unfinished phera's beautifully done...this is the best ending one can ever think of...