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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Speechless..

but wonderfully written ...

Can we cox you to write and epilogue ??

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Reem

@TRND86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You for your comment. Am humbled by the last line specially. :)

And I would have to agree, over the past few weeks, the brother-sister bond that they had created as being so beautiful and unique kind of lost its sheen but lets hope that with the wedding things take a better turn and we see our amazing Raizada siblings spell magic.

Thanks for the reply. 😃

The last part was so sad but you made the alternative to what happened in the show very believable. After the humiliation that Khushi & her family were subjected to by Dadi through her words & then by Arnav through his absence, you would expect everyone to react the way they did. Khushi left 😭 & that makes me sad for her but also happy that she had the guts to leave. Arnav well all I have to say is what a sad sad man!! I feel sorry for him but at the same time want him to be punished for breaking an innocent soul. Love is beautiful but complicated and there is no meaning of that love if there is no trust.

P.S. Good use of Buaji's slap here. It was well deserved. I hated the one that was given to Khushi 😡

Edited by TRND86 - 13 years ago

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Superb update.. i really loved your writing style here and how you described each part... awesome

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Rae, you made me cry again..

Khushi, Khushi, has your heart stopped beating finally because it did not see any reason to beat anymore. He failed you when you needed him the most..

Arnav, you were too late...how will you live now, how are you living now without Khushi's heart beating for you...

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

How is one suppose to live without his heartbeat?

I am lost for words! I always am after reading your updates!!
Little too late, eh? Arnav should have come! What about all the promises he made? What about all the love that they shared? Wasn't his love strong enough to withstand this storm?? Trust me if he didn't turn up in the show I would have joined you in that killing spree!!

I love the symbolism you did with the banner! A brilliant story, Rae! Wonderful work as always!! L

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

holy crap woman! you are one talented ass lady! and I needed to use improper language for my amazement!!

wow! wow! wow!

usually i am not one for sad endings...but your writing left no other way. i seriously LOVE LOVE LOVE the way it came together! utter and complete perfection!

I noticed the banners and was wondering and thinking how the represent the battles in the writing. the 7 chapters representation is beautiful!

wow... i am seriously amazed. my heart rate accelerated and i was biting my lip and clenching my hand. the desperation, the hopelessness, the finality in it all... damn!

How was one expected to live without their heartbeat?

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

feeling very sad for the leads - well written - luved it rae - thx for the pm

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Wow that was truly heart wrenching...seriously the pain, turmoil and emotions that came forth was amazing

Thanks for the PM

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Sorry it took me a while to answer the pm.u ended it.
A truely emotional update.khushi is still missing.god,really felt for arnav.the last update with original lines from the show was exceptionally beautiful.the way u used holi confession and khushi promise is just amazing.
Its been a great journey.looking forward for more from u.

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

The last 2 parts was full of emotions & the ending was just a surprise for us & unexpected but since u said the end of the story was meant 2 be in this way so I'll accept it even though it was heartbreaking. The way u describe the seven parts as their uncompleted seven pheres & the banner of the man sitting in the bench was brilliant. All in all this was a very unique & an emotional SS which made me shed tears at the end.😭