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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Awesome final part... That's the best ending u could have come up with... Not knowing abt the whereabts of a person u love the most is pure torture... Where ever she is she won't be happy bcz it's hard to live with a broken heart.

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

take a bow, this was stupendous. I don't think any other writer would put so much effort into the banners as well

Sad story no doubt but incredibly well written👏👏👏

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Rae,

I have said this before and repeat myself, this is heart wrenchingly beautiful. A sucker for happy endings, some place in my heart I thought Arnav did not deserve Khushi. She was just too good for him. This update reminded me of a song and I have posted the lyrics below. At the same time my heart goes out to Arnav, his is not a state I wish on my worst enemy.

Mujhe yunhi karke khwaabon se judaa
Jaane kahan chup ke baitha hai khuda
Jaanu na main kab hua khud se gumshuda
Kaise jiyun rooh bhi mujhse hai judaa

Kyun meri raahein, mujhse pooche ghar kahan hai
Kyun mujhse aake, dastak pooche dar kahan hai
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansein hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi
Takdeer meri bikhri har jagah
Kaise likhun phir se nayi daastan
Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahan
Aahein jo chuni hain meri thi raza
Rehta hoon kyun phir khud se hi khafa
Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata
Tune jo mujhe di jeenay ki saza

Banday tere maathe pe hain jo kheenchi
Bas chand lakeeron jitna hai jahaan
Aansu mere mujhko mita te rahe
Rab ka hukam na mit ta hai yahan
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansien hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

Kyun main jaagoon, aur woh sapne bo raha hai
Kyun mera rab yun, aankhien khole so raha hai
Kyun main jaagoon

Song Name: Kyun Main Jaagoon
Film/Album: Patiala HouseThank you for writing this SS, it was required, in a way life is not a bed of roses, the thorns remind us of that fact each time.- Kalyaani.

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

I think I'm going to cry...
I had been thinking of something like that wen the track was fresh in the show...something about the letter...
Y didn't they tell Arnav...
This was extremely well written... I'm speechless...
Amazing!!!!

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

That was beautifully.

Not only was the whole story's treat to read but the entire thought process behind it was pretty unique and quite amazing!

And I really loved the way you ended it!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Just read the last 2 updates!

And I'm just numb. There was so much pain, so much injustice there... I don't know what to think.

Didn't see the end coming as her missing... 3 years and going on strong...

Thank you for the pm. And the eloquently written SS.

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

I'm speechless!! I don't have words to explain how I'm feeling right now...

I'm crying...it is so damn emotional!! 3 years and no one knows where she is!!!

This update was beautifully written...They way you described Arnav's pain,when he was trying to catch a glimpse of Khushi,was amazing!!

I loved this SS...it was painful yet beautiful!!

Very well written...

Thanks for the pm...

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

i was crying for his mistake his pain but he deserved it i hope were ever she went she is safe khushi is a survivor this was another stumbling block and she pasted it asr in the other hand will live with the memories of how much he screwed up his life awesome ending very heartbreaking but an open end was good thanks for the pm 3 years she did say she would slip through his hands and he would never find her

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Anjali knew all along???She didn't tell him??

More than the fact that Anjali & his mom had hidden the truth from him...Arnav's realization of why they had hid all this from him just showed the extent to which this man regretted becoming what he had ended up becoming and all the things he had lost at the end of it...

The ending...that was painful...though I knew that this SS would probably not have a happy ending...seeing that piece of paper at the end which proclaimed Khushi to be missing and ASR'swas so saddening..i just hope she survived as she is such a strong person!

You write really well!!! Your words not only portray the anguish and pain of the characters in the story..but they also make me feel the same pain,anguish,disbelief that is being felt by your characters!!

Thanks for the pm!!👏

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

its saddening to see Khushi's life (alive or dead) having taken a turn like this...she had to pay for someone else's mistakes, anger, betrayal,hurt and tormented past...wish arnav had given a thought to her, he would have been having khushi with him today,...my heart goes for khushi, sadly i dont feel any sympathy for arnav..

a beautifully written SS👏

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