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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

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~ Two ~ Page 7
~ Three ~ Page 15
~ Four ~ Page 21
~ Five ~ Page 29
~ Six ~ Page 37
~ Seven ~ Page 43

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I probably wont be sending out PMs for this but if I do it will only be to those who have commented on the last part.

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 13 years ago

RES

Right.

So, basically, I was visiting Sona's profile, and I swa that you had a link posted, and being the interfering busybody that I am, I decided to see what the link led to. And I'm glad to say that I wasn't dissapointed.

First up, I love three doors down. And I LOVE the song Here Without You. I was JUST listening to it.

Second up- I have stopped watching the show, yet, for their own safety, I hope the CV's DON'T separate them, even though they are, I wouldn't really care-wa.

Third- I am in love with this concept. Like really. It was so beautifully written.. I could feel Arnav's helplessness. Khushi and Arnav were beautifully shown.

I am eagerly waiting for part 2... PM me if you are doing PMs for this?

-V

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey I'm the second one...woohooo

A really heart touching piece dear...

loved how you described Arnav's emotions...

Arnav is indeed nothing without his Khushi

Update soon😃

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome start Rae, loved every single word of it

And holy crow I'm on Rae's first page,

yippeee

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 13 years ago

Love the song already!

Acha, now the update. That was just so beautiful and touche and elegante!
And the CV wala part, count me in!
Waiting for the other part! Great job :)

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

gripping start... waiting for update...

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

great start

loved the way u hav expressed his feelings

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I told you before, I love the way you have written the black sari scene is beautiful. The dance, not so sexy as much so adorable and Khushi-esque. And the star-gazing remains my favorite , and you have done perfect justice to writing that scene.

I don't know if to empathize or sympathize with Arnav. This man has been through so much and at last when he got a chance at love, it was again taken away from him, willingly or unconsciously. Like I said, you write pain extremely well (remembers YANTOO).

And the lines that followed I think would leave everyone smiling sadly. The Swami antics, those silver coins, brings back nostalgia and yes, makes us realize that they had been in love all along, only to never realize it fully until later. Terrific writing there, really!

I'm really looking forward to this story, because I don't know what the CVs are upto any more.

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ok from the first part I am guessing that this SS will be a sad one so I have to read it alone and not infront of the kids bcz they will go mental seeing me sniffing by either worrying why I am crying or laughing at me for crying over a story... Anyhow the start is beautiful which is a always the always the case with your stories and that's why I love them and if Arnav is guilty of leaving her at the altar then plz show extreme repentance on his part since we r not gonna get that on the show.

P.S: plz update the other SSs as well dying to read them.