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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Arshiarnav1741
fabulous update...i had never really understood the gravity of arnavs constricting emotions untill i had read this...wonderfully written...every chapter u write leave me in awe...u write soo fantastically and i loved how the tables have turned or arnav and anjali...beautiful update, deep and moving

Thank You so much. :)

I am humbled and grateful you feel so. Arnav is a very complex character and one of my favourite fictional characters. Glad you think that I can reflect and do justice his emotions.

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

The last chapter broke my heart...

This one shows positive turns...I am happy that Anjali, for a change, could turn to something other than herself and talk sense to her Chottey...

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Yes. That is exactly how an elder sister should be. Clearly this time Arnav was more on the receiving end, on one hand the love of his life and the other memories of his mother. The support Anjali is providing here is magnanimous. Stunning chapter, and yes, terrific characterization.

Of all the things I thought about Arnav might reasoning with the fact that nothing else matters if he is with Khushi, I never came over the perspective of what Arnav came up in the show and what Anjali came up with, here, the part about his father being a poor excuse of a man, a coward.

Sorry for being so late:/

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: mistyrains
Yes. That is exactly how an elder sister should be. Clearly this time Arnav was more on the receiving end, on one hand the love of his life and the other memories of his mother. The support Anjali is providing here is magnanimous. Stunning chapter, and yes, terrific characterization.

Of all the things I thought about Arnav might reasoning with the fact that nothing else matters if he is with Khushi, I never came over the perspective of what Arnav came up in the show and what Anjali came up with, here, the part about his father being a poor excuse of a man, a coward.
Sorry for being so late:/

Thank You for your comment. :)

The first para is exactly what I wanted to portray here. Arnav, in this scenario, is suffering more and Anjali needs to act like the elder sister.

And the second, I am glad Arnav did that on the show but the Anjali part here was planned way before and written before the Arnav part happened on the show.

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Vengeance of this sort never works out for any good. Arnav would vouch for it. :)

Thank You for your comment and I assure you that neither you nor I nor Anjali smoked anything. :)

You misread my comment, I thought I smoked something, not you.

Your comment about vengeance is well said but then Karma is bitch too. What goes around comes around. So the law of karma dictates that action deserves an equal and opposite reaction. Even in IPK land

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

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Edit:

What was that? I'm speechless.

Firstly, I feel so sad. I'm literally crying. How can you write so well. So Arnav's mom knew everything & Anjali had a letter too. Shit! Why didn't she tell that to Arnav. I knew he'd regret it :(

Everything was so perfectly written Rae. I don't know what to say. I'm still in shock. The way he searched for khushi, the way he begged to buaji, the way he felt incomplete without her & the way he looked at the Guptas with hopeful eyes. I can totally imagine Arnav doing all this. I felt like crying when he thought about "Hamari dhadkane ek ho jaati hai" Beautifully written!

So khushi left him. She fulfilled her promise. Sigh! And she is dead? No! I'll never accept that.

Rae tum SRK fan ho how can you end it like this. End mein toh sab kuch thik ho jaata hai, happys endings. Remember? You can't do this. I'm already crying :'(

This banner is so good.

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Khushi to Arnav:

tera hath se hath chhodna,
tera sayon ka rukh modna,
tera paltake phir na dekhna,
nahi maaf karungi main ..
jab tak hai jaan...jab tak hai jaan...

I wanted her to say this so I added it :P

P.S.- *cough* Epilogue *ahem* Maybe Arnav finally finds khushi *cough* *hint* *not in a state to insert LOL emo* :(

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Res

"Ret ki tarah aapki ungliyon ke beech se nikal jaayenge! Aur mauka miltey hi itna tez bhaagenge ki aap humein dhoond bhi nahin paayenge!"

The end just gave me the shivers, haunting. This is just so painful, so saddening. This last chapter and the chapters before, I know you had been building up slowly to an end, that would bore pain, but this, the missing file case, stunned me. The whole HWY piece, I 'm sure would sear through every reader's mind and stay with them for a long, long time.

And even though my heart breaks for Arnav, I can't help wondering, what about Khushi. That question seems inevitable here. But then some questions are best left unanswered.

I noticed the change in the banner, it amazes me how much thought you have put into this story.

I think YANTOO was your first piece I had read and thought this woman shall do wonders now. HWY proved me wrong, this has to be THE most moving, terrific things you've written till date.

Edited by mistyrains - 12 years ago