SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Excellent job bud!!wow,the way you protrayed the emotions were just beyond words...i just read this update,will check the previous one's when i get time..thanks for the pm..i would have missed this awesome piece,if had not sent you friend request ystrdy;)..continue writing& i would love to read your upcomming works!...

love tania;)

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: beeny
hey it's too good wt to sy & where yo start i'm confused 😕 bt dis tym i loved d confusn😉
u hv done a grtest job love d whl way y expressed swaym's confusn& love & shrn's love & d wy she expressed her love like whole d part u hv don a fab job plz swaron pe likhte rehna & plz Pm me😊
🤗for d update swaron love
❤️😳
Thanx for PM & sry for late..

hey beeny ..thanx dear for such a sweet comment ...m glad u liked the post ...will surely write more on swaron😊🤗😃

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: mili1987
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WOW...very nicely written...wonderful ...amazing...superb...excellent
u made my day..with this update 😃

thanx dear ...m glad u liked my work 😊😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: coolsameera
👏AWESUME ENDIN ND SS WAS FANTASTIC U R A MINDBLOWING WRITER👏

hey thanx a lot dear ...for such a sweet comment..m glad that u liked the ending... 😊😊😊

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: ABBY92
WOW, I loved the fact that you made sure Sharon's confession was really long cause it was necessary for to just let it all out and tell Swayam everything that she feels for him, once and for all !! The end bit was cute when Swayam kisses her to shut her up and Sharon asking him to kiss her again !! This two are the sweetest thing ever !!

hey Abby ...m glad u noticed that part ...its one of my fav line... convo before the last kiss ...these two are magical ... thanx for such nice comment 😊
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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: idiot_box
I just loved this ss!!and the last update was my favourite part!!I just loved how Sharon confessed her feelings for Swayam..she actually poured her heart out to Swayam..she told him how she felt about him from the very first day!!this is one of the best ss i have read from Sharon's point of view!!it makes the character so very human!!and i give you all the credit for penning down Sharon's feelings so very beautifully!!Keep writing more on SwaRon!!

Hey thanx a lot ...m glad u liked this SS... i tried to save the best for last part ...Sharon's confession was needed after all those fights and misunderstanding ...i wanted to make their character more human .. m glad that u noticed...😊

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Mohit kumar mohanty

@mohitmohanty19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

thumbs up...👍🏼...for this great r omantic ending...:)
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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

edited my comment
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65004296�

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Dips 🤗Thanks so much for such a lovely update. Yaar the whole thing is from Sharons POV made it more alluring. I always wanted to know what is happening Sharon,s mind, well it is exactly what we want to hear from sharon. Yaar deep it really a fab update, the whole intensity we want to see in swaron fully found in your OS. Loved it and keep writing such beautifulll OS/SS/FFs plzzz

It is really a wonderful update and I loved it so much. Thanks😳