SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Oye hoye... yaar tell me kaha se start karu...this was the superb update n nice end too...👏👏i mean it was Awesome my dear...yeh update padker toh dil garden garden ho gaya...,seriously the way u expressed sharons feelings n swayams confuse n...i just loved it.😃

but let me clear this yeh ss khatm ho gayi it dosent means k hamari expectation toward u khatm ho gayi hai...plz...dont even think about that...we want another SS,FF yaa OS bhi chalega...(if u feel threaten wala tone in last sentence toh b it)but we want another stuff soon...😉 again thanks for the update...waiting for ur next stuff...😃

n sorry for the late reply...

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

U made my day with dis update
I was undoubtedly d most amazing connfession i ever read
Amazing yaar
Loved it to d core

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

hey very well wirtten update this one...as they say you have given a picture perfect ending to this story...

i enjoyed reading the portions very much...but the part i liked most is the way sharon confessed her love to swayam...it was like the pain for hurting him was visible so as one more thing was visible that she was despirate to get him back in her life by expressing how much she valued his love and how much love she had in heart for him...

it was very pleasent reading to this ss...whenever reading this one i was able to visualise each and every sequence you have written up...so in my view its a big plus or winning point for a writter that somebody is able to visulise what he or she has written...

a big congrats for successfully completing your first story on d3 forum...i know i am not a judege or anything but whatever i said was just from the view point of a regular reader...i am aware of the fact that writting something is a very difficult job...so you not only have done that but also made it so interesting that people were waiting for the updates and were lost deeply in the story...

thanks in advance to you and allfor reading a long and boring comment of mine...i guess i couldnot stop myself from appraising you...

regards

pratik...

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

hey it's too good wt to sy & where yo start i'm confused 😕 bt dis tym i loved d confusn😉
u hv done a grtest job love d whl way y expressed swaym's confusn& love & shrn's love & d wy she expressed her love like whole d part u hv don a fab job plz swaron pe likhte rehna & plz Pm me😊
🤗for d update swaron love
❤️😳
Thanx for PM & sry for late..

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mili1987

@mili1987

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

WOW...very nicely written...wonderful ...amazing...superb...excellent

u made my day..with this update 😃

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Sameera Dhanraj

@coolsameera

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

👏AWESUME ENDIN ND SS WAS FANTASTIC U R A MINDBLOWING WRITER👏

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon
Loved the way you penned down Swayam's confusion regarding Sharon's feelings for him. Confused yet madly in love Swayam who just can't resist Sharon even though he wants too is so adorable. LOve how u have written Sharon's confession. I hope someday we do get to see why Sharon behaves this way on show too. Anyways, Coming to confession...love how Sharon from Diva turned into this insecure helpless head of heels in love with Swayam wali ladki. The way she confessed how she loses control when its about him and ends up hurting him was my fav bit. The kiss in the end was perfect. SS, OS and FF on SwaRon is all we are left with dese days so keep them coming 😊

Thank you for PM..lovely SS. 😊

hey Amrita ..thanx a lot for these nice words... m glad that u liked my work ... i always wanted sharon's confession (on the show) to be something like this... simple yet intense ... hopefully we can see our swaron one day like this ... 😊😊😊
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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Deeps this was beautifully penned. You amply justified Sharon for the way she is, her vulnerability towards love and the reason she always pushed Swayam away nicely put. All her emotions and how she finally open's up her real self breaking in the armor and what exactly that does to Swayam was well put. The final SwaRon confession felt majestic.
What i liked the most about this SS is Swayam being his real self and finally we getting some justification towards Sharon, was a much needed read as we never get that in D3. Super Awesome SS and i hope you come up with something new real soon.

Hey Sudha 😊... thanx a lot dear ...m glad that you liked this part ...i wanted the end to be romantic as well as intense ...we all want sharon to convey her feelings towards swayam ...i wanted it this way ...yeah ..hopefully we get some nice scenes in the show as well...thanx again ...for commenting ...😊😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: venusrockz
sharons words were brilliant...emotions were soo perfect...i vsh if cvs showed dis on screen atleast d dialoges by sharon in dis ...dis ws perfect...keep writing moree

thanx a lot ... m glad u liked this part...😊😊😊
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