SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13 - Page 12

Originally posted by: dips098

thanx 😊😊😊 ... surely i will write more on SWARON

Originally posted by: Nehal92

this is for you 🤗🤗

now about the update... sharon confession it's the best i have read till date.. i loved it.. ..

this lines are my fav..from the day it has been aired

I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...

Do write more on swaron :)

i hope some day in D3 sharon will open up as in ur SS😉

Originally posted by: meevee

Dips...take a bow for a masterfully scripted last part...I dont think even the creators of the character can give a more effective, touching, emotionally mindblowing piece for Sharon's confession...perfect in all senses of the term...her pain, pathos, misgivings, and above all, the depth of her feelings was screaming out in each dialogue u attributed to her...Swayam ko apna pyaar jataane ke liye isse kam kuch bhi kaafi nahi padtha and this is the way u proved that her feelings for him had the same if not more intensity than his for her...fairytale ending indeed - so romantic and so correct for SwaRon...👏

Dips this is just a beginning from u - we expect a lot more work from u bcoz u hav understood the core of SwaRon so well 😊

Originally posted by: swaronland

awesome update👏 one of the best confession i have ever read 😃

loved that how u pointed out the shivam fiasco & its clarification from sharon's point of view & the gift burning also👏 i so wanted to happen this in show but now days show is hopeless😭

my favorite lines from this update

"I told u to leave ...and u left ...why didn't u fight back ...WHY ALWAYS MY WISH IS YOUR COMMAND ...DON'T YOU HAVE ANY WISH ... (she was crying uncontrollably ...shouting at him ...at herself)"😃

ending was superb ☺️

loved last lines also❤️

keep writing more swaron stuff

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Explosive update! You know this is what happens when the CVs leave so many scenes open ended! We have to close them ourselves or else all of us will go completely mental in the head. And you wrote a nice little SS to that purpose. Well done, really! I think all of us needed this closure as much as SwaRon did. And by closure I mean an end to all the open-endedness.

Sharon's monologue was much needed here and you quite efficiently tied up all the misunderstandings and fights they had. Nicely written with raw emotions at its best. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: tejukor

Oye hoye... yaar tell me kaha se start karu...this was the superb update n nice end too...👏👏i mean it was Awesome my dear...yeh update padker toh dil garden garden ho gaya...,seriously the way u expressed sharons feelings n swayams confuse n...i just loved it.😃

but let me clear this yeh ss khatm ho gayi it dosent means k hamari expectation toward u khatm ho gayi hai...plz...dont even think about that...we want another SS,FF yaa OS bhi chalega...(if u feel threaten wala tone in last sentence toh b it)but we want another stuff soon...😉 again thanks for the update...waiting for ur next stuff...😃

n sorry for the late reply...

Originally posted by: D3rocksss

U made my day with dis update
I was undoubtedly d most amazing connfession i ever read
Amazing yaar
Loved it to d core

Originally posted by: pratik54000

hey very well wirtten update this one...as they say you have given a picture perfect ending to this story...

i enjoyed reading the portions very much...but the part i liked most is the way sharon confessed her love to swayam...it was like the pain for hurting him was visible so as one more thing was visible that she was despirate to get him back in her life by expressing how much she valued his love and how much love she had in heart for him...

it was very pleasent reading to this ss...whenever reading this one i was able to visualise each and every sequence you have written up...so in my view its a big plus or winning point for a writter that somebody is able to visulise what he or she has written...

a big congrats for successfully completing your first story on d3 forum...i know i am not a judege or anything but whatever i said was just from the view point of a regular reader...i am aware of the fact that writting something is a very difficult job...so you not only have done that but also made it so interesting that people were waiting for the updates and were lost deeply in the story...

thanks in advance to you and allfor reading a long and boring comment of mine...i guess i couldnot stop myself from appraising you...

regards

pratik...