SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

It was just too good👍🏼

I really love to read updates in which Sharon lets her feeling out. And you just nailed it.

Keep writing more

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: dips098

<font color="#660099"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">hey Pratik ...thanx for such nice words of appreciation ...yeah ..m happy i completed my 1st SS in this forum ..i was able to visualize the sequence myself while writing ...m glad u liked this part ...thanx for such long n sweet comment ...its very encouraging and inspiring to write more ...😊</font></font>

thank you for such nice words dips...sorry i dont know your name so calling you dips...and i am glad my words encouraged you to write more...and i am sure you will come up with one more fab story...and i will be glad to read it...please pm me next when u update...

thank you for responding me...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Excellent job bud!!wow,the way you protrayed the emotions were just beyond words...i just read this update,will check the previous one's when i get time..thanks for the pm..i would have missed this awesome piece,if had not sent you friend request ystrdy;)..continue writing& i would love to read your upcomming works!...

love tania;)

hey Tania..thanx dear for such a sweet comment ... m glad u liked this part...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Res <3
*edited*

Deep!! 🤗
What to say i am still in awe of that part!!
what a lovely description mahn!! 👏
sharon's pov was soo minutely and perfectly described by you!! 👍🏼
every little thing was just fabulous! ⭐️
the confession is one of the bestest i can say!! 😎
and the kiss in the end was awww..☺️
this SS was just close to my heart!! ❤️❤️❤️
do write moree!! 😃

hey Surbhi..thanx dear for such a sweet comment... m glad u liked my work ... thanx a lot for such sweet words of appreciation... they are very encouraging 😊😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Dips 🤗Thanks so much for such a lovely update. Yaar the whole thing is from Sharons POV made it more alluring. I always wanted to know what is happening Sharon,s mind, well it is exactly what we want to hear from sharon. Yaar deep it really a fab update, the whole intensity we want to see in swaron fully found in your OS. Loved it and keep writing such beautifulll OS/SS/FFs plzzz

It is really a wonderful update and I loved it so much. Thanks😳

Hey Sukanya ...thanx dear ..m glad u liked the end ...yeah ...all of us want sharon to confess/express her feelings openly ...thanx again for ur words of appriciation dear ...they are very encouraging ...they inspire me write more 😊😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: mohitmohanty19
thumbs up...👍🏼...for this great r omantic ending...:)
👏

thanx a lot ... 😊😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Rutu
It was just too good👍🏼
I really love to read updates in which Sharon lets her feeling out. And you just nailed it.
Keep writing more

hey Rutu ..thanx a lot ... m glad u liked this last part 😊😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: susi
super cute romance

thanx 😊😊😊

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

good one. keep it up.

sharon's confession was commendable and the kiss was nicely written. you concluding it on a really beautiful note.

thanks for the PM.

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...

sways dialouges during the confession scene

where is swaron lost ???

but thankyou so very much for bringin back all the great memories full of love

thankyou very much

and keep writing

u seriously deserve to be appriciated