SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13 - Page 15

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

good one. keep it up.

sharon's confession was commendable and the kiss was nicely written. you concluding it on a really beautiful note.

thanks for the PM.

thanx dear...m glad u liked the confession part and ending ...thanx for such a nice comment ...

Originally posted by: fatimah_mazna

I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...

sways dialouges during the confession scene

where is swaron lost ???

but thankyou so very much for bringin back all the great memories full of love

thankyou very much

and keep writing

u seriously deserve to be appriciated

thanx dear ... m glad u liked this SS...yeah...the intense Swaron is lost somewhere...thanx for the kind words of appreciation 😊

PART 1
OMG!!!di your are really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
DAMN!!!loved the 1st part like anything packed with right emotions...right dialogues...right thought!!
amazing stuff!!👏⭐️

His heart broke into pieces ... million pieces ...it broke beyond repair ...with all the pain in his heart and frustration in mind ...he just managed to mutter few words ..."It hurts Sharon. It hurts a lot "

"But if you want me to go away...then your wish is my command.. " he said ...
even though he's in pain it's still"your wish is my command"oh!gosh!love u swayam!!😭😳
i knew the accident was to come!and when rey informed HER about htat oh!gosh!!the way you described sharon's reaction to it...made me shock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭and how his last words echoed in her ears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and the WANT to go n meet him!!

His usual bright face was looking pale ... eyes closed ..the same eyes which always convey his care ,affection ,passion, love towards her ...her source of energy ,confidence...source of life ...they were closed ...

😭😭

PART 2
was really nice and with some incomplete convos...but ended on a very very bad note..i understand u needed it to end there!!
but really even this part was as good as the 1st...it was really good that the nurse told HIM about HER taking HIS name during HER sleep!! 😳
"I don't love u any more " ...
i am loving the fact that because HE's not there with HER.she's feeling low..sad...LIFELESS!!!

PART 3
so the fights r not ending yet!...but these fights or arguements or ignore...has got a new flavour!!!!..coz it's always swayam who's running behind 4 answers,reasons but this time it's sharon so the effect,emotions,feelings are really very very awesome!!
thank god it was a dream!n she said please to him!❤️
SURPRISE HAAN!!let me read on to find it!!😃

PART 4
wooowww this part was damn amazingn your SURPRISE shocked me too!!😳
oh!gosh!!this part had total Swaron-ness for which i was waiting...THE KISS how magical it was!!❤️ in the start,when you explained Sharon's anger,restless,...oh!god!!what writing skills man!!!!!!!!loved that part!!👏⭐️ ❤️

hushhh PART 5!!
OMG OMG OMG!!DI!!!!!!!the last was next to PERFECT!!
where sharon finally speaks out..letting out THE FEELINGS which she caved inside her diary n body for such a long time!!...loved the part to the CROE..i actually didnt mind the long n much awaited dialogues...infact i totally lost till the end!!😳
when she spoke about the DIARY you literally explained the whole Swaron journey till here amazing stuff!!!super super awesome!loved that para to every letter!! 😳👏thank you for making me witness this kind of sharon at least through writings!!i always wished for such a thing to happen in the show!!...but this was really more than what i had expected...!too good no too great no too SwaRon!!!di love you till the SwaRon core!! 😳
from the title to the ends of all the parts n then to the final KISS!!!which made them move into THEIR world of love!!everything was perfect!!!!!...from emotions to dialogues to feelings to just everything mind-blowing...the lines which you wrote in the end about kiss love were also amazing!❤️❤️❤️
KEEP WRITING DI!!thank god i read this SS together otherwise i the WAIT could have killed me!! i've tried my best to reply...i really dont know how will take these 5 replies!
love u di 🤗 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

PART 1
OMG!!!di your are really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
DAMN!!!loved the 1st part like anything packed with right emotions...right dialogues...right thought!!
amazing stuff!!👏⭐️

His heart broke into pieces ... million pieces ...it broke beyond repair ...with all the pain in his heart and frustration in mind ...he just managed to mutter few words ..."It hurts Sharon. It hurts a lot "

"But if you want me to go away...then your wish is my command.. " he said ...
even though he's in pain it's still"your wish is my command"oh!gosh!love u swayam!!😭😳
i knew the accident was to come!and when rey informed HER about htat oh!gosh!!the way you described sharon's reaction to it...made me shock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭and how his last words echoed in her ears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and the WANT to go n meet him!!

His usual bright face was looking pale ... eyes closed ..the same eyes which always convey his care ,affection ,passion, love towards her ...her source of energy ,confidence...source of life ...they were closed ...

😭😭

PART 2
was really nice and with some incomplete convos...but ended on a very very bad note..i understand u needed it to end there!!
but really even this part was as good as the 1st...it was really good that the nurse told HIM about HER taking HIS name during HER sleep!! 😳
"I don't love u any more " ...
i am loving the fact that because HE's not there with HER.she's feeling low..sad...LIFELESS!!!

PART 3
so the fights r not ending yet!...but these fights or arguements or ignore...has got a new flavour!!!!..coz it's always swayam who's running behind 4 answers,reasons but this time it's sharon so the effect,emotions,feelings are really very very awesome!!
thank god it was a dream!n she said please to him!❤️
SURPRISE HAAN!!let me read on to find it!!😃

PART 4
wooowww this part was damn amazingn your SURPRISE shocked me too!!😳
oh!gosh!!this part had total Swaron-ness for which i was waiting...THE KISS how magical it was!!❤️ in the start,when you explained Sharon's anger,restless,...oh!god!!what writing skills man!!!!!!!!loved that part!!👏⭐️ ❤️

hushhh PART 5!!
OMG OMG OMG!!DI!!!!!!!the last was next to PERFECT!!
where sharon finally speaks out..letting out THE FEELINGS which she caved inside her diary n body for such a long time!!...loved the part to the CROE..i actually didnt mind the long n much awaited dialogues...infact i totally lost till the end!!😳
when she spoke about the DIARY you literally explained the whole Swaron journey till here amazing stuff!!!super super awesome!loved that para to every letter!! 😳👏thank you for making me witness this kind of sharon at least through writings!!i always wished for such a thing to happen in the show!!...but this was really more than what i had expected...!too good no too great no too SwaRon!!!di love you till the SwaRon core!! 😳
from the title to the ends of all the parts n then to the final KISS!!!which made them move into THEIR world of love!!everything was perfect!!!!!...from emotions to dialogues to feelings to just everything mind-blowing...the lines which you wrote in the end about kiss love were also amazing!❤️❤️❤️
KEEP WRITING DI!!thank god i read this SS together otherwise i the WAIT could have killed me!! i've tried my best to reply...i really dont know how will take these 5 replies!
love u di 🤗 😳 ❤️

Hey Sats🤗

M speechless...awestruck after reading this comments of urs😊... still i will try to put my feelings at this very moment to words...today is dussehera ...this is the best gift i have got today😳...in form of ur comment...i hv told u before...ur comments r the cutest ones so they r really close to my heart...the way u analyzed this SS... its one of my old works...ur comment got me back to that time when i wrote it...awww...u hv given me 5 different comments for 5 chapters...u r sooo sweet...u hv quoted few lines as ur fav ... m really happy that u liked them...while writing all i had in my mind were swaron & their fairytale love...wanted to show the intense swaron love and how much they affect each other in first three chapters...m glad those emotions could reach u dear ...part 4 & 5 are my personal fav ...i had a gr8 time while writing part 4 ...and the kiss part😳...awww...ur comment for part 5 ...u will kill me with the sweetness of ur words for sure...m really glad u liked this SS dear...u made my festive day more special through this comment of urs...luv u too swthrt...🤗❤️

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Sats🤗

M speechless...awestruck after reading this comments of urs😊... still i will try to put my feelings at this very moment to words...today is dussehera ...this is the best gift i have got today😳...in form of ur comment...i hv told u before...ur comments r the cutest ones so they r really close to my heart...the way u analyzed this SS... its one of my old works...ur comment got me back to that time when i wrote it...awww...u hv given me 5 different comments for 5 chapters...u r sooo sweet...u hv quoted few lines as ur fav ... m really happy that u liked them...while writing all i had in my mind were swaron & their fairytale love...wanted to show the intense swaron love and how much they affect each other in first three chapters...m glad those emotions could reach u dear ...part 4 & 5 are my personal fav ...i had a gr8 time while writing part 4 ...and the kiss part😳...awww...ur comment for part 5 ...u will kill me with the sweetness of ur words for sure...m really glad u liked this SS dear...u made my festive day more special through this comment of urs...luv u too swthrt...🤗❤️

awww di you are amazing...now i have to really say that your are the SWEETEST and CUTEST !!
awww i am so so so happy to hear that this reply made your day n was the best gift!!!!!!and most importantly it made your festive day more special!❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

awww di you are amazing...now i have to really say that your are the SWEETEST and CUTEST !!
awww i am so so so happy to hear that this reply made your day n was the best gift!!!!!!and most importantly it made your festive day more special!❤️🤗

Luv u swthrt...❤️🤗...m really glad i met u 😊

Originally posted by: Afshan9

Hi Deepika..

Read ur post SWARON SS : YOUR WISH... MY COMMAND

Like always... When I read ur SS and OSs I couldn't find any similarities between ur writing style... Genius...👏👏👏

But yet all the emotions U portrayed - be it of Swayam or Sharon - It was awesome.😊😊

In all ur OSs, the way Sharon admired her true love to be like, the way she expressed it either in her thoughts or in her diary all r the dreams a common girl like me wishes for her Prince Charming to be like...

You have always set Swayam as a perfect lover, husband, and more than these a perfect friend who not only understands his wife but also truly respects her for what she is...

Love U for this Deep...

Plz don't take it in other ways but, the way U express all the feelings of TRUE LOVE in ur SSs, OSs and FFs can only be expressed when U have experienced such a beautiful phase in ur own life.☺️ Coz the love U r talking about is unbound to any restrictions, its infinite, it doesn't need any words to be expressed. Its the Love which is spoken through eyes and understood through the heart. Such love connects two people to two ends of one chord which is unseen. Its very rare to find such a love but who ever achieves it is the luckiest person on this world..

Never thought that I'd write such things but these are my true feelings which I felt while reading ur works.😳😳

Hope I'm not hurting any of ur emotions..

If so then plz feel free to PM me my errors...

Waiting for ur rply...

Lots and Lots of Love❤️, Hugs🤗, Kisses... Muuuaahhh... and Best Wishes for ur future works...👍🏼

Regards Afshan.

Take care... Bye...

Hey Afshan🤗🤗🤗

A big hug to the newest reader of mine on the block...goshhh...m loving ur comments...as i say my readers r my inspiration..their kind words make me write more...this SS is very very close to my heart...and one my fav write ups ...m really glad u liked this one..its special...love is undoubtedly the most beautiful feeling...u have to experience it to know it...to feel it...its heavenly...ur sweet words made my day sweetheart...and please feel free to point out my weak points..m open to criticism...

First of all,huge thanx deepika.. for link..as i am big fond of reading swaron ss ff n os,i am not aware of u'r writing skills.. so after reading all os,which is awesome and great..i just read this ss.. and i just loved it...i really admire this story becoz u add swaron d3 track with u'r story...and i am last one reader so,i am very happy to remember all swaron scenes from footloose with tanha wala swaron and sneha..
well, u describe each and every swaron scene with high intensity of their passionate love..
i loved sharon's frame of mind...how much she loves him but never want to confess... and what to say..swayam is great as always..sweet and true love of sharon..
i know, in serial,we never get to see sharon herself confess her love to swayam..but u done it... so hats off for u...u describe sharon's pov so so good and right way... and confession from sharon's side is wonderfull...no fact...
and yes,how can i forgot swaron kiss...so sweet..and super special just like previous stories..
so at last,i just loved it.. i am so happy to read u'r all written works..ss,ff n os..
so,my journey of reading u'r stories continues.. becoz i am too late.. to read u'r work... and yes,this ss is really special and adorable...
thanx
prateek

I reserve my spot here Deepika, as I can read at 1 go, yayy.