SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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Swathi

@swathi_swaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

i read the whole SS in one shot and believe me its just awesome... 👏

loved the sharon's confession...

Edited by aarush123 - 12 years ago

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

wow... i just read you this ss...
its truly amazing...
it so had that swaronish flavour in that...
i could literally imagine swaron actually doing this...
i must say agan you are one of the awsome swaron writrs we have go on if..

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anandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

yaar deepika,..!! juzz tell me tum itta accha kaise likhti ho..???
ite deep sweet pure intense thoughts tumhare dimag mein kaha se aate h..!!!
ur each and every write up makes me feel yaar jaanat padhne ko mil rahi h..!!
i mean ur juzz fabulous man..!!
everytime i read it u juzz leave me speechless...
Ab toh post k liye bhi kami padh rahi h..!!!
Fab bab3s
Keep it up..!!👏

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: anandita
yaar deepika,..!! juzz tell me tum itta accha kaise likhti ho..???
ite deep sweet pure intense thoughts tumhare dimag mein kaha se aate h..!!!
ur each and every write up makes me feel yaar jaanat padhne ko mil rahi h..!!
i mean ur juzz fabulous man..!!
everytime i read it u juzz leave me speechless...
Ab toh post k liye bhi kami padh rahi h..!!!
Fab bab3s
Keep it up..!!👏

thank u so much ani 🤗...for ur sweet words 😳

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Di 🤗
First of all am regretting dat am reading dis ss so so so late.. From so many months i missed out on somethin very beautiful. .
I loved all parts specially confession it was mesmerising 😳 dis ss had everything in it.. It made me cry at some parts den suddenly it made me smile it had wow moments in it.. It was heart touching heart warming n totally magical am mesmerized 😳 ur just amazing d way u pen down ur thoughts r amazing.. I so adore u n ur my favourite di n as i said before also ur my ⭐️
Once again u stole my heart di.. Each n every part of dis ss touched my heart i could feel everything myself as if am watching it happening n not reading it..
Fabulously written amazing concept perfectly put together all in all brilliant work 👏
U deserve a standing ovation n very very big round of applause di
👏

Kash maine yeh pehle pada hota but nevertheless i atleast read otherwise i would have missed somethin really awesome 😳 😳
Keep it up keep writing more i love ur work n i ll love to read more of it 😳

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

that was superb and fantastic ending...

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kespari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

i didn't want to break ur heart ...because my heart also broke with urs

owsume line

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kespari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...

you know depu di you are amazing

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Anindita Dhar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

This is fab work di ..

Di if possible aise hi mujhe roz ek link dia karo aapke ss os ke purane wale.. 😃

Love you

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934800

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

your wish is my command

that was sooo goood deep, u knw it might sound wierd and mean but i love it when sharon see swayam in pain and feel bad😛... swayam accident was fab idea.. coz i really feel that one only value some one or thing when they go through the pain and thought of loosing them... sharon,s corncern for swayam is something love to see and u shown eaxctly that so much so that she fainted... loved...loved that little moment of sharon lost in swayam and dnt not here what her friend saying...

its useless to say that u r a brillient writter coz i bet u heard it like zillion times but i m still gna say that u r by far my one and only fav writer on this forum...no i think not just in forum but every thing i read u r one among them but u certainly shine bright in all ma fav writer may be coz i relate to ur stuff more.

Omg the kiss bit was awesome and the conversation followd after that was just yhe cutest i ve seen, awesome awesome just loved that convo more than there kiss. the whole sharon confession.was written so bloody well like each every emotion got to.me. this was an amazung ss as i got to see sharon running after swayam for a change in last part when sharon says "u twk too much just shut up and kiss me" that was so romantic and cute...and i got to knw this one is one of ur first write up which us again highly commendable...h r awesom Light mishra 😉 sbd i love u very.much okai.

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago

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