SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91


thanx 😊... m glad u liked this update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Res <3
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Deep!! šŸ¤—
What to say i am still in awe of that part!!
what a lovely description mahn!! šŸ‘
sharon's pov was soo minutely and perfectly described by you!! šŸ‘šŸ¼
every little thing was just fabulous! ā­ļø
the confession is one of the bestest i can say!! šŸ˜Ž
and the kiss in the end was awww..ā˜ŗļø
this SS was just close to my heart!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
do write moree!! 😃
Edited by surbhimathur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Loved the way you penned down Swayam's confusion regarding Sharon's feelings for him. Confused yet madly in love Swayam who just can't resist Sharon even though he wants too is so adorable. LOve how u have written Sharon's confession. I hope someday we do get to see why Sharon behaves this way on show too. Anyways, Coming to confession...love how Sharon from Diva turned into this insecure helpless head of heels in love with Swayam wali ladki. The way she confessed how she loses control when its about him and ends up hurting him was my fav bit. The kiss in the end was perfect. SS, OS and FF on SwaRon is all we are left with dese days so keep them coming 😊

Thank you for PM..lovely SS. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deeps this was beautifully penned. You amply justified Sharon for the way she is, her vulnerability towards love and the reason she always pushed Swayam away nicely put. All her emotions and how she finally open's up her real self breaking in the armor and what exactly that does to Swayam was well put. The final SwaRon confession felt majestic.
What i liked the most about this SS is Swayam being his real self and finally we getting some justification towards Sharon, was a much needed read as we never get that in D3. Super Awesome SS and i hope you come up with something new real soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
sharons words were brilliant...emotions were soo perfect...i vsh if cvs showed dis on screen atleast d dialoges by sharon in dis ...dis ws perfect...keep writing moree
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

awsome...do write many more oss!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
this is for you šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
now about the update... sharon confession it's the best i have read till date.. i loved it.. ..
this lines are my fav..from the day it has been aired
I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...

Do write more on swaron :)

i hope some day in D3 sharon will open up as in ur SSšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dips...take a bow for a masterfully scripted last part...I dont think even the creators of the character can give a more effective, touching, emotionally mindblowing piece for Sharon's confession...perfect in all senses of the term...her pain, pathos, misgivings, and above all, the depth of her feelings was screaming out in each dialogue u attributed to her...Swayam ko apna pyaar jataane ke liye isse kam kuch bhi kaafi nahi padtha and this is the way u proved that her feelings for him had the same if not more intensity than his for her...fairytale ending indeed - so romantic and so correct for SwaRon...šŸ‘
Dips this is just a beginning from u - we expect a lot more work from u bcoz u hav understood the core of SwaRon so well 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updatešŸ‘ one of the best confession i have ever read 😃
loved that how u pointed out the shivam fiasco & its clarification from sharon's point of view & the gift burning alsošŸ‘ i so wanted to happen this in show but now days show is hopeless😭
my favorite lines from this update
"I told u to leave ...and u left ...why didn't u fight back ...WHY ALWAYS MY WISH IS YOUR COMMAND ...DON'T YOU HAVE ANY WISH ... (she was crying uncontrollably ...shouting at him ...at herself)"😃
ending was superb ā˜ŗļø
loved last lines alsoā¤ļø
keep writing more swaron stuff
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Explosive update! You know this is what happens when the CVs leave so many scenes open ended! We have to close them ourselves or else all of us will go completely mental in the head. And you wrote a nice little SS to that purpose. Well done, really! I think all of us needed this closure as much as SwaRon did. And by closure I mean an end to all the open-endedness.

Sharon's monologue was much needed here and you quite efficiently tied up all the misunderstandings and fights they had. Nicely written with raw emotions at its best. šŸ‘šŸ¼

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