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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

I hope it is up to the mark and reaches your expectations.

Next update will come after another 8 pages of comments! :)

I hope you all enjoyed reading it and will also enjoy in future.

Thanks to :

The following 18 member(s) liked the above post:

Lavender6666, sirani07, doll_sg, sweetcherry95, pooja123456, meerubzara, beeny,

AbhiyaMaaneet, dips098, d3lover90, nature2, sadiyaswaron, --Rose--, abhilasha_dream, pratik54000, tanukaswaron, Sudha-SK, MoNayaHolicPrag,

Thank you for liking my part and showering your love on me!! :)

And thanks to all those who took out time and commented.

I will try to reply to each comment soon!

Thank you once again !

Also, I am going to Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary for three days so I won't be able to update.

I apologize! 😳

For PMs add IntricateKnots. in your Buddy List!

Till then Take Care!

Ciao :*

_Nivriti

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Sorry if you found anything abrupt.

Do tell me, I will try to alter it! :)

Also, I was very pissed off as we do not have many NiMmi Scenes.

And therefore I decided upon this confession!

Sorry if it weren't up to the mark!

Or if it did not reach your expectations..

I tried my best! 😳

__Nivriti

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Nivriti it was perfect update in every sense...at it was fair in legnth...

it covered all the characters so perfectly and everybody had perfect role to play in the update...loved the way you described the dressing whole 5 people gunjan, swayam, rey, kriya and sharon...

after that whole pub sequence and dancing was very gracefully descripted i loved that...than came out and out nilesh simmi part which was so pleasure to read and nil confession was just superb...loved the update...

thanks for pm...enjoyed reading the update...

regards

pratik

p.s. enjoy the outing to bharatpur bir sanctuary...its a rocking place...try to cover whole place there and see all the amazing things there...have a rocking trip...have funfilled three days nivriti...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Awesome updates
loved them
eager to know sharon's answer..

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

the update was upto the mark

loved update

waiting for next

buh i knw after 8 pages of comments

Edited by sweetcherry95 - 12 years ago

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

OMG u updated Wow:-):-):-) I love u for this Nivz:-):-):-) Brilliant update yaar:-):-) The Emotions, The Friendship, The Love, The Dialogs, The Dresses, and Everything was jus PERFECT:-):-):-) hey Is baar to chal gaya but After ur trip WE WANT A VERY LONG UPDATE OK and Lots of Swayam scenes:-):-);-) good luck:-):-):-)

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

waiting to knw sharons answer to shivam...the track ahead seems very interesting!!!!
thanks for the pm and do conitnue to pm me!!!

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Nivriti...AWESOME update dear...the sweet romantic moments between Kriyansh...Nimmi confession...Swayam- Gunjan dance...sharon's reaction..can't wait for her answer to shivam...it was awesome ...plz update soon... 😊

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

hey firstly i am really sorry for nt commentng regulary. ALso knwing the fact u especially decided a swaron ff for me .
Well it was as usual a very amazing update.. Believe me i am lovmg swayam gunjan jodi.. Tough i knw they arnt one... Lolz... WEll all the updates i havnt commntd on were also rreeaally gud.. I am lovng the jealous sharon.. AN i hope she says no to shivam... Wat else... U rockd the update.. It was awesome.. Will wait fr ur update.. :)

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Both parts 4 nd 5 were awesum dear.lovd the confesion of nimmi.lykd the brother-sister bond of swayam nd sakshi.aww.nd yup w8ing 4 sharon answer to shivam.thanks 4 pm.

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