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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Nice update...mind blowing...i m luving this ff...pls continue...update

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Nivriti it was awesome update to say the list...enjoyed every bit of it...

this update showed us more of swayam's family and how all of them are...i loved the way you showed swayam's mom and dad and their love story it was very pleasent reading...than came a rigid dadi sa as you can see bound with traditions and not able to accept sakshi but swayam being the caring brother always took care sakshi and her need...the bond of swayam and sakshi as brother-sister was very nicely shown...

now the convo of swayam,sakshi and gunjan was the main highlight of the update...i loved reading it it was so much fun...gunjan and swayam do share a very good raport and sakshi is in love with gunjan's brother is a new interesting turn...and swayam asking gunjan to be with him was so cutely written...

i am also confused about one thing does swayam have any feelings for sharon? and the secret swayam is maintaing is being taken out so nicely it has still maintained the level of interest to know what swayam is hiding...

excellent work nivriti...loved the update to core...

regards

pratik...

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

nyc part kuch 😕😕 hai but nyc

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

wow...nyc!!!it will be a very good ff...
u nicely described swayam's history...it was a good post...hope u update soon...

really want to knw wats wrong with swayam!!!

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

I m dying to knw wat happens to swayam

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

wow...finally update !!!!👏

i knw i cud nt motivate people nor i can help them..as i am an introvert😔

beautiful update...according to me it was quite big😊

swayam history/past describe simply and pleasantly

loved this update 😃

update next part soon

will be waiting😛

waise i had a question to ask

5 pages comments k chahye kay spamming chalegi????😆😉

Edited by sweetcherry95 - 13 years ago

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

nice SS...i like swayam POV waaley SS...nice to see swayam vth so much of importance

when will swayam sharon have a talk????..swayam is having a convo vth everyone...plzz make them talk to each other...i knw it has to be more of swayam...i knw he is hurt but swayam vthout even thought of sharon is incomplete...at least wud want to see his anger towards her...his nil thoughts not making me relate to the lover boy swayam vch is always existent vthin him...may be cozz he is too furious on sharon???..sry just stating wat i felt after reading this...dont mind...you wrk is grt.

swayam-centered feels good. plzz do PM me.

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Girl u r an awesome writer
I really like how this ss become interesting after each update
swayam is really a sweet bro,he make sure that sakshi also get love from his dadisa.i really liked gunjan-swayam bonding...
Did swayam still love sharon because sharon start feeling for swayam n.i thing swayam have some problems which he do not want to share with his friend
update it soon n pls pm me