D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 12

Just read Chapter 4 and 5 together !! The fact that you gave Swayam's parents their own back story was really thoughtful and the way Swayam didn't like when his Dadi ignored Sakshi was really sweet !! Coming to the next update, the NiMmi scenes were really adorable and I agree,I like NiMmi a lot too so to see a confession for them made me happy !! God, I hope Sharon doesn't agree to Shivam's proposal just to irritate Swayam !! That would be so annoying to watch !! On second thoughts, I now wonder if Swayam will be affected even is she does accept the proposal !! I guess I'll find out in the next update !!

Awesome update
I start liking swayam -gunjan jodi..i just imagine rey's expression when he saw kria in that dress lol
sharon jealous of gunjan ahh she start liking swayam but swayam still love her or not as he was not affected by shivam dancing closely with sharon
i liked nimmi part too finally they r official
waiting for next part eagerly

nice fff

it was good

I read all d chapters today itself n must admit all r brilliantly written!!
U r truely a proficient writer!!
Ur narrativ style is just amazing.. An interest instantly grows up!!
Loved it..
M glad dat u took swayam as a centre of attraction as thr still r many things which r left to b covered!!
N livinstyle.. Omg.. LAVISH!!
Sharon too loves swayam but wonder y she do not accepts it.. What wud go in accepting d facts!!
Loved to c kriyam's bonding!!
Ohki.. Now swayam has a brother n two sisters.. N tani b h re!!
Swayam is always a sweetheart.. He cares a lot for sakshi..
Now cumin to gunjan.. K fine yea she aint a negativ character n wud play an imp role in swaron's life but m nt likin her involvement wid swayam.. Probably coz swayam looks d best wid sharon n its buggin me seeing swayam is not gtn affected by sharon...
Yea I do love agressiv swayam but not when he does not get affectd probably coz i hvnt seen him lik dis.. But yea.. Thr r changes in d story,n gunjan is one of dem..

N n n whts wid swayam.. Is he sufferin from some disease?? Obv yes..it seems so
But y aint he tellin dis to his frns.. They all deserve to know as they all love hm n care fr him a lot!!

Though I m a die hard kriyaanshian but i wud love to read d continuation of dis story!!
I m actually likin it!!
Add me in ur pm list!
Buddy req sent..!

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