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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Hey Guys! 🤗

I am back with an update…!

And plenty of requests and help from Rashi [-Rose-] I am updating. 😉

Thank you so much Rashi for being the true friend! 😳

It's a bit short, but this is what will help the story! 😆

It will develop slowly and steadily and for that many short updates will come!

I had gone to my friend's place and therefore I could not update.

Sorry for being late.

But I am appalled seeing this response.😲

Thank you so much guys!

Here We Go! :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

I hope it is up to the mark and reaches your expectations.

Next update will come after another 5 pages of comments! :)

I hope you all enjoyed reading it and will also enjoy in future.

Thanks to :

The following 24 member(s) liked the above post:

anjanasaini1912, sirani07, doll_sg, tanzz15, sweetcherry95, pooja123456,

rosamale, d3lover90, idiot_box, swaronamit, nature2, pratik54000, additive_monaya,

spn-abhay, --Rose--, drashsree100, abhilasha_dream, gopi06, Riasa, ABBY92, lovely7010, Sudha-SK, abhiya_pkyek, MoNayaHolicPrag,

Thank you for liking my part and showering your love on me!! :)

And thanks to all those who took out time and commented.

I will try to reply to each comment soon!

Thank you once again !

For PMs add IntricateKnots. in your Buddy List!

Till then Take Care!

Ciao :*

_Nivriti

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 13 years ago

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doll_sg

@doll_sg

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

its nice

loved swayam and shaksi's relationship

hate his daadisa🤢

n d way swayam teased gunjan

looking forward for the party

continue soon

😃

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Wowww... Finally u updated Nivz:-):-):-) Thanks a lot:-):-)... Now coming to the update, Its FANTASTIC yaar:-):-) I really loved Swayam's bond with his Family:-) what a lovely family:-):-) And Sakshi and Swayam Awww so sweet bro sis:-)... You discribed Swayam's family Past really well:-) Oops his dadi dont like sakshi:O Poor girl... So Tani is here:-) Thats cool:-):-) And Swayam's parents convo was jus SUPERB:-) hehehe... Now Eagerly waiting for the next part,, The Party:-):-):-) and Hey hey Dont thank me ok, You are my friend now:-):-):-) I must say , You are a BEAUTIFUL writer Nivz:-):-):-)

Edited by --Rose-- - 13 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

I liked how the story is moving forward.

The glimpse of their past life was nicely written. I loved how Swayam made sure his sister gets the fair amount of love from dadi sa. He is a sweet Brother. Sakshi,Swayam and Gunjan part was a pleasure read.

So Gunjan and Swayam and going to the party now..looking forward to what we have in store at the party when all friends meet.

One question though, does Swayam still has feelings for Sharon or is he already over her.

And from the last update i sense Sharon has slowly started to develop some feelings for Swayam.

But there seems to be something Swayam and his family know that he is hiding from his friends..looking forward to read about how the mystery unfolds.

Update soon..

Thanks

Sudha

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

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unres
hey Nivirti
i read all d cheter& all were amazing i love wahole d pats & swaym's love & concern abt Shkshi
& i don't like orthodox dadisa
bt hope Sharon come to kn d real reson of swaym's leaving country so plz update soon Plz Pm me..:)

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Hey Nivriti...Loved this part...m loving swayam n gunjan's equation...swayam's relationship and care towards her twin sister...its very sweet...the part where u gave the family history...it was nice and touching...swayam's parents blushing...so cute...can't wait for the party ...where swayam will face sharon...m loving the way u r unfolding the story ...i love ur style of writing...update soon 👏😊😃

Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago