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Posted: 10 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
P.S : I am sorry if you find this rude, you clearly had no business commenting on how thegameison writes, and how she comments. A writer does not always resort to flowery words otherwise. I found that pretty much insulting. She is a beautiful and mature writer, so please, do not comment upon her, and her character over here, and also how YOU believe that her works have been written by somebody else. If you continue this, and someone else gets a whiff of this, this really can become nasty. She is a writer much loved.

Once again Please do not start another fight online by suggesting wrong things.Of course her work is good infact way better than lots of os ffs i have read, even yours,sorry to say that. but i didnt comment on it because she hates me. I am also woman but I will not lie down and take it if somebody calls me names and curses me. She may be a wonderful woman and a friend to "you" but not to me.Please do read my comment to thegameison once again. Of course you are being rude and judgemental when you just take a part of the sentence and judge it. Please do read the entire conversation. I said her language used in her OS and the language used in the comments to me are two different styles, her grammar words etc. Thats itself is an appreciation of her work that i cant believe the same person has written it. I was taunting her and giving her back in her own coin. but respectfully. I know she has written the OS because now she has replied to me in her writing style. A complete unknown person reading her comments like these to me and then her OS what is that person to think?

One question though, both of you are writers and isnt it the readres that make you famous authors? You cannot survive without us and need us and i have just made one comment and this is how you treat me.

This is her (thegameison) comment to me

((I'd have all the time in the world and still not bother to write you a long-ass reply to your simply ass remarks. Nivriti is my friend, a. Freedom of speech works both ways, b. The older and maturer way is to shut up about what you don't like, there's plenty to appreciate, both here and elsewhere,c.Also, do not tell her what she is obliged to do, I am answering on her behalf, she's not obliged to conform, none of us is, we're writers, for crying out loud, d.

What is this place? 😳))

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Posted: 10 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: thegameison
I am a woman, not a man, therefore, cut the he. Now, I am a writer and the OS you mentioned was written by me a couple of years ago or so. I write fancy words, doesn't mean I have to communicate pretentiously too, doesn't mean I don't or shouldn't swear. And if I swear, doesn't mean you'll assume I am a man.

There is a marked difference between constructive criticism and bashing. The first words you used to describe this fiction were 'the most boring fan fiction I ever read' or something on those lines. I have said worse about, say, Chetan Bhagat and Stephanie Meyer, the reader has as much right of involvement in the character's being as the writer does. So, if you don't like this story's Swayum, sure, you don't like him. We get it. But what you keep forgetting is that you cannot influence what the writer writes. There, you cannot and will have no influence. If you want people such as myself to not swear, talk like we're civil, you might start by making a better choice of words yourself. For, I don't read this fiction myself and I have no right to argue with you upon its plot or story or whatever. I merely come here to support my friend who has hitherto been a silent reader of our bickering, for some odd reason I cannot point out for you.

But I will say this, I have been writing for six years and at times people don't understand what I want to say, at yet other times, the feedback seems like a chocolate-coated slap across my face because its inadequacy is insulting. There's all sorts of readers and there's all sorts of writers, I have accepted that because, at the end of the day, our existences are codependent. If you find my candor uncouth, or my wish to help out a friend, unnecessary, I cannot help you. However, I will go from here before this thread is locked down or before you hurl one more judgment at me, because I can be more judgmental than is it okay to be and then this fanciness I have painted for you will leave and this will drag on. I know we both have it in us.

My final words here would still be those I meant to imply at the beginning. You might benefit in leaving here and reading other works, much better suited to your taste. I'm certain you come here, not to dampen your mood by arguing with people with abrasive tongues who won't stop but to enjoy your time and explore what this site has to offer.

Me too thegameison. I am a woman too. It was not mentioned in the index of your OS whether you are a woman or not, nor in your comments. fansy words or swear words male or female, i dont care, I will not take it down if somone uses swear words at me intentionally. So if you want be addressed as a woman introduce yourself.

thegameison you should understand the circumstances (just like you understood nivriti's) under which I wrote those comments. I read Nivriti's FF one late nite back to back in one hr i think, and something didnt ring bell nor could i connect with it about FF so i wrote the comments on it. Probably one o clock in the nite. The sentence that you are quoting is not a sentence to start a third world war. in my mind i still have those doubts about those characters she used which were from very famous tv serials which ran for years on the tv, definitly when you mention those characters i can only see the actors who acted it out in my mind like i found with swayam (like gunjan as Sanaya Irani) very weird. these are my thoughts and to me this was not gelling with d3 background. again my thoughts, I had expressed it and she replied. Baath Khatham. Just that line "most boring" is it what it caused all this? where is the disrespect in this line? and if you had explained to me as you explained here then, I would have done what was needed to her as i had no intention of hurting her or anyone for that matter.

From there You brought it this lvl. If you had written to me properly from the beginning by now I would have apologised to Nivrita for my remark.But now i dont think i have done anything wrong in my comments or remarks, I have not disrespected Nivrita nor used any kind of bad language to put my point across nor forced her to do anything, then why all of you are telling me that I am forcing her to confirm or curbing her writing or influence her writing. What rubbish?

Sincerely speaking I really thought you were an eighteen old boy passing all these comments. Hormones overacting for a dear friend. You had six years of experience and this is how you handled this situation. thegameison I dont need any fanciness painted for me., but you could have tried this style and you would have convinced me and this wouldnt have dragged on. I have always felt if you can make a friend or a believer that is anyday better than creating an enemy.

And Yes you do need us readers and audience to put you on top.That is fact of Life.