Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50 - Page 31

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan

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yeh kya sab ke sab apni jagah "res" karne udhan-choo ho gaye??😕😆😆

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

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Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

First of all, mere saare buddies, iss itne bare huge size ka delay karne ke liye

Please, please please forgive me. i know this time I've crossed the line of being late and most of you might just be feeling like me😛😛. But I was going to update much sooner if I just hadn't agreed to Tuli (Have I ever mention how annoying younger sisters can be?😆😆) It isn't an excuse, but I really had to scrap the ENTIRE chapter to include 2 BIG flashback scenes...so now that part3 has become SO LONG..please bear with me, and if you think its sagging and lame and dragging, feel free to voice your thought😆😆, I really wouldn't mind at all...
And thank you all for waiting patiently while I disappeared..I love u all..

Sooo much for the support u guys give me...its priceless..

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Scroll down for part 3
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for u

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Great Update Oyshee!!..⭐️👏👏👏...Loved it!! The new characters are superb!! It must have taken sooo long to think them out and then with selecting appropriate faces for them, and then arranging the pics.!!! FAB work😳👏.

About the update, I'll come back later and change so reserved as of now!! Get back to you soon😳.

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan

Okay...So Oyshee meri jaan, super-dooper sorry for the late reply, but was busy a little😛😛. Ab time mila hain toh abhi main leisurely comment karungi😉😃. It's okay love😳😳

Sabse pehle........ aur dherr saari jhappiya for finally updating!!!🤗
Awww...jhappis to you too🤗🤗...main tum sab ke liye hi toh likhti hoon😛

Jab maine tumhara pm dekha toh I was like.....🥳🥳.....

and trust me, I read it innediately, and them I was.
Hi..Hi..Hi😃😃

Have I mentioned u r a ⭐️⭐️?? Coz u trully are👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼. Part 3 was absolutely mind-blowing!! Simply AMAZING!! Bass ek baat hain, baad mein aati hoon😉
Awww...again...thanks yaar Tuli😳😳

Pehle wala scene, I felt like punching Majnu😡😡..how can he disrespect DS?😡😡..but bang on dialogs yaar👍🏼..and loved the way M tackled him👏👏...she's truly grown up now isnt she😳😳
You felt like that?😲..Matlab meri mehnat rang layi!! All i want you all is to HATE him😡😡😆😆😉. Yes M's grown now (Almost 3 years mere SS mein, abhi bhi agar bari na ho toh kaise chalega?😆..)

The Giri-Man. scenes were too good!! JUST TOO GOOD!!⭐️.
Bole toh thanks again😉
Giriraj is truly a changed person now!! and so is J😃..and the way u wrote it, outstanding!! Hmn, Karan Dhanrajgir (nice name😉)...intresting character of ur "NOT-AT-ALL-GARBLED"
mind!! 😕😛

And KT was Karan, woowww. Hi..Hi...I love him too😳
Btw, your character sketch was superb, and the actor selection was really really really awesome!! i cant believe u took my suggestion yaar...with Shush and Suku...I love u!!🤗Your suggestions were too good yaar, and I think Suku and Shush. are perfect for Raj and Rav.😉...Plus, with Sukku and Dhrasti, I'm kinda trying to bring back the DMG air..Sanjeevani ke puntar😆😆😉

Plus the hospital scenes..hmn, Uday checking the doc. out😆😆..old habit dye hard. phirse tune uday ko phatichar banaya😆..kitna accha describe karti hain yaar?
😆😆..Bilkul😉...old habit do die hard. But there's this tug at his heart that's stopping him from truly checking her out😉.

And Uss Chikki aur Vermas ko include karna zaruri thaa kya...well jab tune kiya hain toh it must be for aomething..i trust u completely...but still hate chikki😡😡..
I had too include them...I really 😡 hate when characters disappear from a show without properly shown farewell reasons!! And I'll need them as the story progresses so just plzz mere liye bear them. P.S. i hate Chikki too😡

And last but the best, the two manveer scenes😳😳😳
Did you like them?? I tried my best 😆
(well, im still stumped that u did 2 instead of 4..NOT DONE🤢🤢).. they were simple mind-blowing!!Thanks yaar.."rolls eye" abbey maine kaha na, you'll all get them parr 2 more scenes were just impossible to include in this update. It wouldnt have made sense then😕. I promise, in the next i'll include them😉.

First the dance one, with VB's "Naani-sahb hume ghar se nikaal dengi.." waala dialog..😆😆...so VB like yaar, I tell you😉..and Manyata's concern for UV just touches my heart!!
I Hope i did sound like VB😆..and i'm really into this you know: trying to portray how much M feels for him (just trying to make their bond seem strong enough).
Then the romance during the dance and the dialogs⭐️..tooo tooo tooo GOOD!!..and then the bedroom scene!! Hay...garmi lag gayi yaar😆😆😆...so HOT!! Yaar tu toh jaan nikaal hi degi UV phatichar plus UV shirtless😳😳)..Hiii..hii.hiii😆😆...and the whole scene was making me☺️..and then, u just stopped my heart!! Manveer Kiss!!.u nailed it yaar!!..the situation leading to it was ⭐️⭐️..and they way u described it👏...Did u have to be so vivid!!?? I felt i was watching it happen!! And how could u stop there yaar?..Aise cliff hanger pe latka diya? With last scene of MAnveer 1st kiss😲😲..??..Haan that was Manvee's first kiss😎☺️..arrey tujhe kya garmi lagi, garmi toh MUJHE lag rahi tthee when i was writting this one😳😳😆😆...Khatam toh karna thaa na, 20 pages likhke thak gayi thee yaar, agla update jald karr dungi theek hain?

ab bata mera dhishum dhishum scene kah gayab kiya tune..??..😲..Bata bata BATA???Tera dhishum dhishum waala scene next waale mein tapak para hain😆. Dont worry, just wait for the next part😉

P.S. loved the Manveer scenes..
And I love ya..😊😊..thank you soo much for liking part3⭐️😳

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan

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yeh kya sab ke sab apni jagah "res" karne udhan-choo ho gaye??😕😆😆

Originally posted by: lilybabes

Originally posted by: kakacool123

Hey Oyshee, sorry for the late reply but you know I have exams and so I will be taking a vacation from IF but i'm back temp just to check this out.

It was fabulous update, I really enjoyed each part and the interactions between all of your chracters are mindblowing.

Thank for the PM and please to update soon, I forgive you for the late update becasue you gave us a beautiful long update.

Ash