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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smiley12

tere moo se bandariya bhi doll laghta hai😛😆love u 2345678...😉han nai tou🤗

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: obsesedbyammy

LOL, And I love all 3😉😆...Riyu-Piyu⭐️..Tulu-Woolu⭐️..And aur gr8 writter, aapka kya kehna, long wait karwati hain, aur aisa update deti hain jisse next update tak wait karna impossible ho jaata hain😆😆...Humaari QueenShee😳😉⭐️


QueenShee......kya mast naam hain.......wah..wah..wah..😳...thankyou jaanu 😳😉..aur phoolao mereko😆😆
Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
...😳😳😳...⭐️⭐️⭐️......🤗🤗..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: obsesedbyammy

LOL, And I love all 3😉😆...Riyu-Piyu⭐️..Tulu-Woolu⭐️..And aur gr8 writter, aapka kya kehna, long wait karwati hain, aur aisa update deti hain jisse next update tak wait karna impossible ho jaata hain😆😆...Humaari QueenShee😳😉⭐️

Yaha koi I Luv U ka game ho raha hain kya??😆😆..Main bhi kehti hoon, i love you all!! specially humaari QueenShee...(Ashi bindaas naam hain yaar, aaj se main Circuit Bhai ko yahi bulaungi😆😉)...Luv U QueenShee😳⭐️😆😆
Edited by tuliluvsarmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

0yeshee swty n0w i read ur wh0le ff and seriously it was mind blowing i lovd all 3 partx n0w m in l0ve wid din ff t0o n0w u betr update regularly cox m realy impatient reader;) kindly add me in ur pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious


0yeshee swty n0w i read ur wh0le ff and seriously it was mind blowing i lovd all 3 partx n0w m in l0ve wid din ff t0o n0w u betr update regularly cox m realy impatient reader;) kindly add me in ur pm list!

Done😉.. thanks yaar🤗...yes I'll update soon. Luv ya😳😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hi oyesheee...how r u...😃

i m sorry dear,,,,i coulnt post my comment early eventhough i had reserve the post also,,,,so sorry for tht😆
but beleive me i did read ur update as soon as u posted it yesterday...😉
nd must say
.it was just awesum, amazing,mindblowing, fantabulous, fantasic, lovely, beautiful, terific wonderful ,,,,👏👏👏
nd see now i m falling short of words in ur praise... 😉😆
u all guys are such awesum writers tht our words fall short in ur praise for such beautiful updates tht u all give to us...👏
i have already told u before tht i have fallen in love with ur story...😳

newys,,,,,i think now i m gonna read this chap again so tht i can give my comment in a nice nd apt way😳...
ok.. dear...😳

till then

reserve...for my further (GAATHA)😆 comment


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Posted: 13 years ago
for da 1st tym meine kisi ka SS ek hi tym mein bohat saare epi padha...it was superb👏..well writeen oyshee!!good job..
i lovd da bonding of Giriraj & manyata...although DEK mein kabhi aisa nah hua...
hayee tum saab ki SS & FF padh pahke i am missing DEK even more...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
update soon...
Edited by Dae_drmer - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

🤗queenshee aka oyeshee urf my circuit bhai 😎tera intazaar khatam hua ye rha mere res wala comment 😆

ur

smiley😊
ria 😊
sisi☺️
paro😳
bandariya😈
chota chatri 😉
drugdealer⭐️

arre jo bolna hai bol lena ajj tuje apne comment se pakka do gi han nai touchal agge wala tu read kar 😉hmmm tune apne ss mein kia mast mast character add kiye hain haye☺️karan tacker as karan😎apun ka tu bhai jasa hai😆and shushant wah ye bhi apun ka bhai laghta hai😆mere 2 2 bhaioo ko apne ss mein add kia tune and raveena sukarti is cute 👍🏼apun ko drasti dhami itni achi nahi laghti but theek hai apni sisi ne kuch tu soch ke add kia hoga na😆just kidding😈apni tu madhubala bhabhi hai re rk dada ki wifey isse bhi add kar deti muskaan ka pati bana ke🤣rk is my dada 3😆 hahahahaha AK ko chor ke pure telly wood ke hero mere dada laghte hain🤣wo kia hai na DIL MERA AK KA ❤️🤣

chal ff pe ate hain

ye salla ghatia chaudry awww iss ki tou😡😆aryan🤢iss ke bare mein apun baat na hi kare tu hi acha hai iss ka tu mein vaarta bana ke 😈chal chor kis ko kiloo gi ye batane ki zaroorat nai samjh ja🤣or ye cikki behen ji or soni anti bhi tere ff mein a gayi behen ji's🤢or ye bloody akash,aryan🤢jo bhi hai jai ko blackmail kar rha tha😡m ne achi band bajji iss ki 👍🏼or j and m bonding is too good👍🏼haye or mere bro karan ka kia kehna jai ko meri bhabhi bana dia🤣👍🏼chale ga😛hame handle karna ata hai 🤣vijaybhai is cute yaar⭐️and m and uv flashbacks 😭ata hai parh ke 👏too good amazing work my oyesheeand unnati and m friendship phele se hi rocking thi ⭐️ but giri or m friendship hmmm good idea😆baap beti ki jodi achi hai👍🏼but susur ji kab bane ge hamri m ke 🤣ok raveena and rajeev scene is good 👍🏼like uday and unnati😎good work👏arre uday kab taak patient 101 bana rhe ga😭my poor uday😭chal isse jaldi se theek kar ab😆or ye kia ye muskaan chaada hai meri uv ki doc🤓dur rakhna isse uv se😆good job👏awesome awesome awesome work👏


or ab jaldi update karna warna agli baar bhi comment res kar ke bagh gao gi 🤣or iss se bhi zaida wait karwaoo gi😛🤣🤗do continue soon😳👍🏼⭐️ 🤗 🤗

Edited by smiley12 - 13 years ago

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