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Okay guys, so needless to say all of us are down the dumps since DEK is..hmn, "sighs"..its even difficult the type, well ending...🤢🤢🤢. And all these articles about Priyash breakup and AK and Adaa Khan🤢🤢🤢.
Don't u think we shouldn't poke our noses into their personal lives?? I mean, its their life and its completely upto them whether to stay together or go separate ways; and without the complete details, we shouldn't be commenting!!! And the rumour about AK and Adaa Khan has been rubbished by her...so I really think it is really disrespectful to comment on his character and seriously, i was SHOCKED today when I came across some comments that some of us made...don't wanna go there.
So, the point is, that we should really not bash AK or PG, coz its their life...and SHOULD be happy that they still seem to be good friends and get along with each other and have given us such intensely beautiful Manveer scenes even after the...umm, don't wanna say the word, hope U all will understand😕.
Even if Priyash is no more (THINKING ABOUT IT MAKES ME 🤢, REALLY!! though i still hope they get back together somehow!!!) this doesn't change the fact that Manveer rocked, continues to do so and will forever in our hearts!!! They had this type of fiery chemistry that is exceptionally rare and nothing can match upto that!! So lets enjoy the rest of remaining Manveer these 4 days (😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭), and then in our dearest forum...and if only, if we put the right amount of pressure on the channel and SA (by continuing to spam, email and calls) requesting a sequel, who know, we might get DEK season2😃. Yeah...the hopeless optimistic in me refuses to give up, I TELL YOU😆.
SO, ENOUGH OF MY BHASHAN, SORRY IF I'VE BORED U BUT I JUST HAD TO GET THIS OUT!!! I CANT TOLERATE THIS KINDA NEGATIVITY ON OUR FORUM...OUR DEAREST FORUM IS JUST NOT MEANT FOR SUCH NEGATIVITY😉😉😉.
COMING TO THE ACTUAL POINT😕😕😕...BEWARE, IM GONNA BORE U FURTHER NOW!!😆
Since past 2 days, this idea has made itself home in my head and I just can't seem to get rid of it...so read at your own risk and do comment whether u liked it or hated it...coz i need 2 know u know😆😆😆. Okay, so here goes...
----- Prologue: Wait -----
The beach, at this hour, was almost deserted. The wind crisp but slow, just a slight breeze while the clouds had balled together in a calm, hinting a storm. The people had taken note of the clouds, and were slowly leaving as the first images of lightning began to register on the distant horizon, making the sky flash, as if someone was taking photographs. The sea, reflecting the colour of the sky, looked like liquid iron and the waves splashed harshly on the rocks. As the last of the crowd departed, they saw the girl sitting on the rock with her hands around her knees, staring blankly at the ocean, her feet immersed in the water. They saw the blank expression on her face, the tiredness that was evident in her eyes, the dullness of her cheeks. With all this, they didn't even remotely connect the two body-builder men, who stood a few paces away, with her...present to protect her. The girl that they viewed, no one for once related her to the Princess Manyata that made news now and then for her charity or successes.
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She noticed his hesitation as he came upto her and stood still. He seemed like he wanted to say something, but was contemplating. Finally, the words come out..
Bodyguard 1: You're Highness, it's getting late. It seems that the storm is coming. I think we should return now.
She was quite for a moment, her face expressionless. Slowly, she sighed and looked up at him, smiling. As it had been for the past two years, the smile did not reach her eyes.
Manyata: Okay. You go get the car ready, I'll be a minute.
Bodyguard: Jee Hukum.
As he made his way towards the car, he thought for what felt like the hundredth time why did Her Highness keep coming at this place, and that too always at this particular time, always alone? What pull did this place have and what happened to her whenever she was here? She'd always sit on the same rock, the same way and play with the pebbles while looking out at the sea. She'd sit here for hours, not saying a word when usually, she was the very person on the Palace who talked the most! And Why On Earth, would this look take over her face whenever she was here?A pain that could get any stone crying.
So many questions, but none had the answers, and he knew, as he saw her stand up, that all of this somehow, was related to one person. A person who would never come back to answer them.
Don't u think we shouldn't poke our noses into their personal lives?? I mean, its their life and its completely upto them whether to stay together or go separate ways; and without the complete details, we shouldn't be commenting!!! And the rumour about AK and Adaa Khan has been rubbished by her...so I really think it is really disrespectful to comment on his character and seriously, i was SHOCKED today when I came across some comments that some of us made...don't wanna go there.
So, the point is, that we should really not bash AK or PG, coz its their life...and SHOULD be happy that they still seem to be good friends and get along with each other and have given us such intensely beautiful Manveer scenes even after the...umm, don't wanna say the word, hope U all will understand😕.
Even if Priyash is no more (THINKING ABOUT IT MAKES ME 🤢, REALLY!! though i still hope they get back together somehow!!!) this doesn't change the fact that Manveer rocked, continues to do so and will forever in our hearts!!! They had this type of fiery chemistry that is exceptionally rare and nothing can match upto that!! So lets enjoy the rest of remaining Manveer these 4 days (😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭), and then in our dearest forum...and if only, if we put the right amount of pressure on the channel and SA (by continuing to spam, email and calls) requesting a sequel, who know, we might get DEK season2😃. Yeah...the hopeless optimistic in me refuses to give up, I TELL YOU😆.
SO, ENOUGH OF MY BHASHAN, SORRY IF I'VE BORED U BUT I JUST HAD TO GET THIS OUT!!! I CANT TOLERATE THIS KINDA NEGATIVITY ON OUR FORUM...OUR DEAREST FORUM IS JUST NOT MEANT FOR SUCH NEGATIVITY😉😉😉.
COMING TO THE ACTUAL POINT😕😕😕...BEWARE, IM GONNA BORE U FURTHER NOW!!😆
Since past 2 days, this idea has made itself home in my head and I just can't seem to get rid of it...so read at your own risk and do comment whether u liked it or hated it...coz i need 2 know u know😆😆😆. Okay, so here goes...
----- Prologue: Wait -----
The beach, at this hour, was almost deserted. The wind crisp but slow, just a slight breeze while the clouds had balled together in a calm, hinting a storm. The people had taken note of the clouds, and were slowly leaving as the first images of lightning began to register on the distant horizon, making the sky flash, as if someone was taking photographs. The sea, reflecting the colour of the sky, looked like liquid iron and the waves splashed harshly on the rocks. As the last of the crowd departed, they saw the girl sitting on the rock with her hands around her knees, staring blankly at the ocean, her feet immersed in the water. They saw the blank expression on her face, the tiredness that was evident in her eyes, the dullness of her cheeks. With all this, they didn't even remotely connect the two body-builder men, who stood a few paces away, with her...present to protect her. The girl that they viewed, no one for once related her to the Princess Manyata that made news now and then for her charity or successes.
____
She noticed his hesitation as he came upto her and stood still. He seemed like he wanted to say something, but was contemplating. Finally, the words come out..
Bodyguard 1: You're Highness, it's getting late. It seems that the storm is coming. I think we should return now.
She was quite for a moment, her face expressionless. Slowly, she sighed and looked up at him, smiling. As it had been for the past two years, the smile did not reach her eyes.
Manyata: Okay. You go get the car ready, I'll be a minute.
Bodyguard: Jee Hukum.
As he made his way towards the car, he thought for what felt like the hundredth time why did Her Highness keep coming at this place, and that too always at this particular time, always alone? What pull did this place have and what happened to her whenever she was here? She'd always sit on the same rock, the same way and play with the pebbles while looking out at the sea. She'd sit here for hours, not saying a word when usually, she was the very person on the Palace who talked the most! And Why On Earth, would this look take over her face whenever she was here?A pain that could get any stone crying.
So many questions, but none had the answers, and he knew, as he saw her stand up, that all of this somehow, was related to one person. A person who would never come back to answer them.
_________
She stood up slowly, her eyes longing, her face expectant...as if expecting something...hoping. Hope. That was all she was left with. She wasn't complaining...nor was her faith faltering. It remained strong; the beach gave her strength...willed her to stand strong. And she did. This beach, where they had bumped into each other, reminded her that they were destined for each other...they were destined to be together. And while her breaths continued, his couldn't have stopped.
Her hope remained strong, and so did her faith in his promise...a promise that was all she was living for...that whatever happened, no one will come between them...nothing will come between.
Remembering...his deep voice reverberating in her ears, her face lit up, and slowly, a smile made its presence across her lips. With her faith renewed and strengthened...she closed her eyes and, for the last time, before pulling up mask of pleasantness over her face and re-erecting the walls strength that she had built around herself...she let her heart cry out to him once again,tears escaping her eyes and as she sighed, she hoped that this time, her call would reach him...
You're Princess waits...She loves you more each passing second and knows you'll come back to her. No one believes her, they say she lives a dream...but she doesn't care. Because they don't know what she does. One day, you'll comeback. You will throw a pebble at her and take her back in you're arms. She's waiting...
She's waits... and loves you Halkat-Vede...
And till her last breath, she'll wait if she has to...
Each day, she opens her eyes and hopes for you're return..and knows, one day, you will come back...
As this breeze touches my face, i know it will touch yours too..and tell you how much I miss you. They will let you know how much I love you Uday...how much I love you...
_______
At another city, the wind blew over, passing through the window, blowing the curtains as it entered the cabin. Like a lovers caress, it touched his lying form, kissing his face.
The nurse had come to check on patient no.101, her routine stroll. She knew what to expect. But what what she saw when she entered the room sent her rushing for the doctor. Quite surprisingly, for the first time in months, the heart-rate monitoring machine had conveyed a simple message: Patient no.101's heart beats, which had been gradually going downwards, had miraculously, increased.
******
Okay so that was it!! Well, thanks for reaching upto hear...and thanks a ton for enduring my lame attempt..but really, wow...feels good now that I've finally typed it out!! Guess it wasn't going to let me be in peace in my head!!😆😆😆 Okay, so this story has the background of DEK up until the last day (The last episode), which is yet to telecast. This evening is 2 years after...and yeah, everything till the last episode is as it is.
So now its up to you guys😆😆😆...do read and tell me what u all think. This is an SS, or a short-story on Manveer, which i hope to continue, but only if you all want me too...coz i don't know what its like😕😕😕...so PLZZZ comment and like (if you like it of course), and tell me whether I should continue or not😉😉.
And about my ff: Hum tumpe martein hain...I'll continue it if you guys want me too, so do tell me about that too😉😉.
If u haven't read it, plzz check it out (only if you want 2😳😳😳). That's the link to chap1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2984534
And my last request😉😉😉. PLEASE watch Dekha Ek Khwaab at its original telecast time at 8:30 p.m. lets give our favorite show the send-off that it deserves. With gr8 trps😉😉. Lets make it evident what BIG a MISTAKE the Sony people r making by taking it off air!!😳😳😳
Tata for now😉😉😉.
lots of love😳😳😳
Oyshee😉😉.
She stood up slowly, her eyes longing, her face expectant...as if expecting something...hoping. Hope. That was all she was left with. She wasn't complaining...nor was her faith faltering. It remained strong; the beach gave her strength...willed her to stand strong. And she did. This beach, where they had bumped into each other, reminded her that they were destined for each other...they were destined to be together. And while her breaths continued, his couldn't have stopped.
Her hope remained strong, and so did her faith in his promise...a promise that was all she was living for...that whatever happened, no one will come between them...nothing will come between.
Remembering...his deep voice reverberating in her ears, her face lit up, and slowly, a smile made its presence across her lips. With her faith renewed and strengthened...she closed her eyes and, for the last time, before pulling up mask of pleasantness over her face and re-erecting the walls strength that she had built around herself...she let her heart cry out to him once again,tears escaping her eyes and as she sighed, she hoped that this time, her call would reach him...
You're Princess waits...She loves you more each passing second and knows you'll come back to her. No one believes her, they say she lives a dream...but she doesn't care. Because they don't know what she does. One day, you'll comeback. You will throw a pebble at her and take her back in you're arms. She's waiting...
She's waits... and loves you Halkat-Vede...
And till her last breath, she'll wait if she has to...
Each day, she opens her eyes and hopes for you're return..and knows, one day, you will come back...
As this breeze touches my face, i know it will touch yours too..and tell you how much I miss you. They will let you know how much I love you Uday...how much I love you...
_______
At another city, the wind blew over, passing through the window, blowing the curtains as it entered the cabin. Like a lovers caress, it touched his lying form, kissing his face.
The nurse had come to check on patient no.101, her routine stroll. She knew what to expect. But what what she saw when she entered the room sent her rushing for the doctor. Quite surprisingly, for the first time in months, the heart-rate monitoring machine had conveyed a simple message: Patient no.101's heart beats, which had been gradually going downwards, had miraculously, increased.
******
Okay so that was it!! Well, thanks for reaching upto hear...and thanks a ton for enduring my lame attempt..but really, wow...feels good now that I've finally typed it out!! Guess it wasn't going to let me be in peace in my head!!😆😆😆 Okay, so this story has the background of DEK up until the last day (The last episode), which is yet to telecast. This evening is 2 years after...and yeah, everything till the last episode is as it is.
So now its up to you guys😆😆😆...do read and tell me what u all think. This is an SS, or a short-story on Manveer, which i hope to continue, but only if you all want me too...coz i don't know what its like😕😕😕...so PLZZZ comment and like (if you like it of course), and tell me whether I should continue or not😉😉.
And about my ff: Hum tumpe martein hain...I'll continue it if you guys want me too, so do tell me about that too😉😉.
If u haven't read it, plzz check it out (only if you want 2😳😳😳). That's the link to chap1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2984534
And my last request😉😉😉. PLEASE watch Dekha Ek Khwaab at its original telecast time at 8:30 p.m. lets give our favorite show the send-off that it deserves. With gr8 trps😉😉. Lets make it evident what BIG a MISTAKE the Sony people r making by taking it off air!!😳😳😳
Tata for now😉😉😉.
lots of love😳😳😳
Oyshee😉😉.
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