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tuliluvsarmaan

@tuliluvsarmaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

part3 aur character sketch ki tareef baad mein karungi, pehle yeh bata mera fb dhishum-dhishum scene kaha gaya jiss baare mein tuli baat karr rahi tthee?? aur 4 fbs se 2 fbs kaise ho gayye???

Answer wanted!!!!!

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved the update thanks for sharing!

😳😳😳

Originally posted by: pia.raha
i jst love long updateess and dats why u r frgiven for being late😊 manyata has bcum so intellignt in handling qstns!!!! bt she is so alone without uday...😭 hope they meet soon...
uday and m dance lesson thn dat room scene was jstt suprb!!!!!!! wen m blushes itss really sweet and uday's teasing is jst bang on!!!!!!!!! will be waitng for the nxt update!!!!😊

Thanks pia.raha (BTW, whats your name?)..loved ur comment. Manveer will meet soon😉..and I'll update soon as well. Love Ya😳

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan
part3 aur character sketch ki tareef baad mein karungi, pehle yeh bata mera fb dhishum-dhishum scene kaha gaya jiss baare mein tuli baat karr rahi tthee?? aur 4 fbs se 2 fbs kaise ho gayye???

Answer wanted!!!!!

intezaar karo baccha...😆...intezaar ka phal meetha hota hain. Jo kaha tha woh karungi😊😉

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: fia21
Woah 20 pages of one chapter. Now that was definitely a treat Oyshee. Loved it to bits. I am especially loving iriraj and Manyata's bond, something that was always missing in the show. And omg I hate Akash and his chawl wala's. Poor Uday, I feel for him. Can't wait to rwach the parts where Uday and Manyata would come face-to-face. This is getting interesting. Update the next part soon!

thanks yaar fifu😳😳😳...luv ya😉. Okay I just had to include the chawl walas, for a very specific reason that would have been obvious by now but since the part that explained that i havent added yet (going to include tonight). You'll se then...just had to do it (whats coming up😉)...after writting it yaar, i feel so😎...dill halka ho gaya😆😆...just wait for it😉

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

loved the update...but then I need to read older chap. to reply in detail...this first time i read it ...and wow their is my fav. sanjivni hospital of DMG as well

so many new characters too...would like read how u move the story😊

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: shana0127

loved the update...but then I need to read older chap. to reply in detail...this first time i read it ...and wow their is my fav. sanjivni hospital of DMG as well

so many new characters too...would like read how u move the story😊

THANNKS SHANA DII...YEAD, I LOVED DMG TOO...come to think of it, most of us are ex-DMG-ians😆😆.

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tuliluvsarmaan

@tuliluvsarmaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: Tuli.Luvs.Uday
res

Originally posted by: mahi0809
res!!

Originally posted by: smiley12
res😛

Originally posted by: obsesedbyammy
res

😆😆😆😆😆

yeh kya sab ke sab apni jagah "res" karne udhan-choo ho gaye??😕😆😆

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Hi OYSHEE,

Thank u so much for finally updating & thanx for such a long part.

It was extremely interesting.

You are a fantastic writer.👏👏👏

Every scene was so beautiful...I just can't pick a favourite part.

A SMALL REQUEST: Please speed up Uday's recovery and let him remember his life soon!

U can make the psycho-therapist...A MIRACLE WORKER!!!😆😆

GOOD GOING...UPDATE SOON!

Edited by navinahun - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: navinahun
Hi OYSHEE,
Thank u so much for finally updating & thanx for such a long part.

It was extremely interesting.

You are a fantastic writer.👏👏👏

Every scene was so beautiful...I just can't pick a favourite part.

A SMALL REQUEST: Please speed up Uday's recovery and let him remember his life soon!

U can make the psycho-therapist...A MIRACLE WORKER!!!😆😆

GOOD GOING...UPDATE SOON!

Thanks yaar for liking part3...i was sooo nervous how it turned out, coz i hadn't planned it exactly this way u know. Glad you all liked it. 🤗...Manveer will come face to face soon, and watch out for what hapens then😉. Love Ya!!

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#290

Hey...dear i have read all 3 chp. And...Omg...awsomeee...hey...i love DMG...its one of my fvrt serial...now back to te point...flash back was awsomeee...urghhh...that akash uncle and his chawl wali chikki and soni...they are irritating...plzzz...update soon.