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oyshee

@..oishu..

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Hey...dear i have read all 3 chp. And...Omg...awsomeee...hey...i love DMG...its one of my fvrt serial...now back to te point...flash back was awsomeee...urghhh...that akash uncle and his chawl wali chikki and soni...they are irritating...plzzz...update soon.

😳😳 thanks

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: obsesedbyammy
Apology partially accepted after such a cute way of apolagising😳😳..i love ur emoticons (the monkeys r sooo cute😳)...baaki ki maafi after reading the update😉😆.

Thanks yaar..😛😛..U can get these here: http://www.laymark.com/#icons 😉

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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tuliluvsarmaan

@tuliluvsarmaan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Okay...So Oyshee meri jaan, super-dooper sorry for the late reply, but was busy a little😛😛. Ab time mila hain toh abhi main leisurely comment karungi😉😃.

Sabse pehle........ aur dherr saari jhappiya for finally updating!!!⭐️⭐️🤗🤗🤗🤗

Jab maine tumhara pm dekha toh I was like.....🥳🥳.....

and trust me, I read it innediately, and them I was👏👏.

Have I mentioned u r a ⭐️⭐️?? Coz u trully are👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼. Part 3 was absolutely mind-blowing!! Simply AMAZING!! Bass ek baat hain, baad mein aati hoon😉

Pehle wala scene, I felt like punching Majnu😡😡..how can he disrespect DS?😡😡..but bang on dialogs yaar👍🏼..and loved the way M tackled him

...she's truly grown up mow isnt she😳😳

The Giri-Man. scenes were too good!! JUST TOO GOOD!!😳😳

⭐️⭐️. Giriraj is truly a changed person now!! and so is J😃..and the way u wrote it, outstanding!! Hmn, Karan Dhanrajgir (nice name😉)...intresting character of ur "NOT-AT-ALL-GARBLED" mind!! And KT was Karan, woowww. Btw, your character sketch was superb, and the actor selection was really really really awesome!! i cant believe u took my suggestion yaar...with Shush and Suku...I love u!!🤗

Plus the hospital scenes..hmn, Uday checking the doc. out😆😆..old habit dye hard. phirse tune uday ko phatichar banaya😆..kitna accha describe karti hain yaar?

And Uss Chikki aur Vermas ko include karna zaruri thaa kya...well jab tune kiya hain toh it must be for aomething..i trust u completely...but still hate chikki😡😡..

And last but the best, the two manveer scenes😳😳😳 (well, im still stumped that u did 2 instead of 4..NOT DONE🤢🤢).. they were simple mind-blowing!!

First the dance one, with VB's "Naani-sahb hume ghar se nikaal dengi.." waala dialog..😆😆...so VB like yaar, I tell you😉..and Manyata's concern for UV just touches my heart!! Then the romance during the dance and the dialogs😳😳⭐️⭐️..tooo tooo tooo GOOD!!..and then the bedroom scene!! Hay...garmi lag gayi yaar😆😆😆...so HOT!! Yaar tu toh jaan nikaal hi degi UV phatichar plus UV shirtless😳😳)..and the whole scene was making me☺️..and then, u just stopped my heart!! Manveer Kiss!!.u nailed it yaar!!..the situation leading to it was ⭐️⭐️..and they way u described it😳😳⭐️⭐️

...Did u have to be so vivid!!?? I felt i was watching it happen!! And how could u stop there yaar?..Aise cliff hanger pe latka diya? With last scene of MAnveer 1st kiss😲😲..??..

ab bata mera dhishumdhishum scene kah gayab kiya tune..??..🥱🥱😲😲..Bata bata BATA???

P.S. loved the Manveer scenes..

Edited by tuliluvsarmaan - 13 years ago

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Ash

@kakacool123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Hey Oyshee, sorry for the late reply but you know I have exams and so I will be taking a vacation from IF but i'm back temp just to check this out.

It was fabulous update, I really enjoyed each part and the interactions between all of your chracters are mindblowing.

Thank for the PM and please to update soon, I forgive you for the late update becasue you gave us a beautiful long update.

Ash

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Shivani

@Asmimelody

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Di mere paas shabdh nahi hai mai kese kahun kuch bhi kahoongi toh bhi kam hoga its just awesome superb:)di aap Twilight ki fan hai?me hun:)mere saare favorite dialogs the iss part mai:)sach mai di u r a gr8 writer:)n thanks 4 d PM:)im sorry...love you:)

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oyshee

@..oishu..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: Asmimelody
Di mere paas shabdh nahi hai mai kese kahun kuch bhi kahoongi toh bhi kam hoga its just awesome superb:)di aap Twilight ki fan hai?me hun:)mere saare favorite dialogs the iss part mai:)sach mai di u r a gr8 writer:)n thanks 4 d PM:)im sorry...love you:)

main twlight ki vaddhi fan😆😆..luv u too cchutki😳😳..kitna acchi acchi baate karti hain😳😳..

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ARManVeerMriara

@ARManVeerMriara

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan
part3 aur character sketch ki tareef baad mein karungi, pehle yeh bata mera fb dhishum-dhishum scene kaha gaya jiss baare mein tuli baat karr rahi tthee?? aur 4 fbs se 2 fbs kaise ho gayye???

Answer wanted!!!!!

EXACTLY!! AUR 3-4 SCENES KI JAGAH SIRF 2?? BAKI KE DO KAHA GAWAAB KARR DIYA CIRCUIT BHAI?? NOT NOT NOT DONE😕😕...TRULY!! JAWAAB DO!! Tumne humse 2 scenes kyun cheen liye?

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan
😆😆😆😆😆
yeh kya sab ke sab apni jagah "res" karne udhan-choo ho gaye??😕😆😆

LOL😆😆..abhi jaake change karti hoon 😆

Edited by obsesedbyammy - 13 years ago

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

👏👏thanks...loved it...👏👏👏

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Awesome FF and awesome update! Loved the long part 3... it was worth the wait! Please pm me when you update next... and yes, please update soon!

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oyshee

@..oishu..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07
👏👏thanks...loved it...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesum blossom gr8...

Thanks Yaar😳😳..both of you⭐️⭐️...

Originally posted by: pmpm1
Awesome FF and awesome update! Loved the long part 3... it was worth the wait! Please pm me when you update next... and yes, please update soon!

Thanks yaar...😳⭐️.....😳😳...I'll surely add u to the list, but what's ur name?

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago