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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Somehow while reading this, I felt tears stringing down my face! I dint even realize it! This was beautiful yet sad.

The way you've written it, is sooo extremely heart wrenching! The things he asked her back, ahh if only one could return those things!
He actually admitted alot more than he has ever before.

The line where he says he wants back his Laad- governor-ness, a fanit smile lit up because I immdiately recalled all the wonderful nok jhoks they had! Such beautiful memories!

You've captured the emotions bang on. If I want Arnav's regret I want it this way! Now even if the CV's dont show me this, I'll always remember this and say I got my redemption. :)

A beautiful work, Rae! I'm soo glad I got to read this. Thank you for writing this!

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Oh my osh u made me cry

Everything is blur on keyboard

So amazingly emotional... Wow man I wish our show was so good like this I am sure they will cme up with some stupid track

Pls send to the cvs we would love to see tis on screen enacted by our Barun

That will be a treat to watch so many emotions

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Rae,

Oh My.. What was that..?? I mean, woah..!! Fantastic..!! Really touching..!! Loved it..!! Totally Loved it..!! :)

lOve,

.aNaMiKa.

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Raee!! I could've read this earlier, but powercut! :(

Beautiful.. When I read the title, I thought it was from Khushi's POV. Remember that song 'Woh meri neend, mera chain' from Hum Hain Raahi Pyaar Ke? Yeah, the dimaag went in that direction!
:P

But this was awesome! And when I read you were skeptical about it, I was like, 'Pfft! Yeah, right!' And see? Aap bhi na Rae, kamaal karte hain! :P :D

Beautiful man.. Did anyone expect Arnav to ask for payback? Haha, I don't think so!

Great work! :)

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

ohh Gulzar+ R D Burman !! ultimate song!!❤️

n this was very beautiful!! very deep n emotional... felt every bit of wat he said...

If this really happens in d show I am going to break down for sure!!

Tht was one superb n memorable OS 😊

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

so wonderful and emotional. Im surprised by your talent! The choice of song, the writing of emotions.. all so wonderful. would you consider continuing this and presenting Khushi's POV along with a song? The reason I ask is because Khushi's actions, on the show, of being a Martyr are just getting OTT, somehow sickly-sweet and unrealistic. I wonder how your Khushi would react in this situation.

Please do consider. Thanks.

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

dat was beautiful..
loved it..
brilliantly written.. thanxx for d pm.

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Very emotionally written & it touched my heart. I really feel terrible for Arnav. Is it possible for Khushi 2 pay back all his demands? I doubt she can.

After a long time seeing your OS was really a pleasure. Thanx 4 the PM.

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Awww so emotional...loved it. thanks for the pm :) :) :)

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

This was sure heart warming yet heart breaking!

When I read envelope delivered to Arnav by NK, I thought a heart break and I was preparing myself for reading it.

It was a nice one, that u ignored it and rather gave me an OS on Arnav's POV. I know he did mistakes in past but now he's changed and he'll struggle the same amount as Kushi did in past.

Except that Men wont break and cry!

I liked the way how he spoke to Kushi.. Bring back old times so that he could move on with that mask!

I so loved the entire chat that I'm not pointing this is my favorite or that is!

Very well written Rae! It is definitely worth proof reading and there is no problem u didnt do it as I see NO mistakes in there. I dunno I might have missed due to the content depth in it :)

P.S: I didnt see the translation post was down :( I had a hard time reading the Hindi ones and understanding it. Arghh, after liking it, 2nd post was translation! 😉

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