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that was touching ...and poignant ...

that was really good!! Heart felt and poignant!!!

That was just so heart wrenching and beautiful at the same time!

Oh wow, AT, that was almost Shakesperean in its wit and cleverness, like Portia asking Shylock to take his pound of flesh without spilling a drop of blood.

If K's heart doesn't melt or her brain refuses to see his reason, then I'm afraid she will be a lesser person than I think her to be! You've captured his anguish so well.

And very poignant and very beautiful, I loved the story and the song that inspired it. Thanks for the pm.

Will you now tell us about K's response to his very reasonable and justifiable demand?

Originally posted by: Japonica

Oh wow, AT, that was almost Shakesperean in its wit and cleverness, like Portia asking Shylock to take his pound of flesh without spilling a drop of blood.

If K's heart doesn't melt or her brain refuses to see his reason, then I'm afraid she will be a lesser person than I think her to be! You've captured his anguish so well.

And very poignant and very beautiful, I loved the story and the song that inspired it. Thanks for the pm.

Will you now tell us about K's response to his very reasonable and justifiable demand?

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Res :)

Edit:

Rae! *wipes tear*

This was so..so beautiful.

But I don't this happening in the show, I'm telling you I'll start crying if something like this happens.

Each & every word held a meaning. I always wanted to read something based on Arnav's feelings & today when I read this I had tears in my eyes!

Khushi deserves to be happy & so I think her decision was right.

But Arnav's pain was so perfectly described. I bow down Rae!

I love this song!

This was truly amazing

Keep writing!

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: Gargee

Wow Rae!! Rulane ke liye nikli thi na? Well, you've achieved it!! So Have you accepted that Script Writer Offer they gave you then? 😉 Beautiful Dialogues Hon!!

Oh God- Arnav!! So so sad! Rae Honey, I demand a second Part, in your amazing and unique style, where Khushi's POV during the phone call- or maybe her reaction after the phone call is described. Please. I beg you.

I'm actually on my knees in front of the lappy right now begging you to please please write it- because its only you that would be able to do complete justice to it! (That's what I feel!)

Oh, and I'm so sorry for being a horrible and irregular Reviewer, but I've been really busy shifting and all that- But I'll comment on all your works soon enough! 😃

Loads of Love!