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shraddska

@shraddska

Voyager

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was beautiful yet heart breaking...

Khushi's silence spoke more than her words and he understood it all

How wonderful...

Every special moment they shared together, he asked her to return...

I was a bit dazed when it ended and didnt realise that it had...

Leaves me wanting for more...

Is there a part two or just leaving it as an OS...😳

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

WOW absolutely beautiful - awesome and amazing OS

i read in of the thread that u are not keeping well - hope u are ok now - thx for the pm

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@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Rae..this one was fabulous!

Khushi sending back the money was probably the last straw for arnav. He just wanted to go back to not feeling. Not caring. But somehow he also noes that itl never happen. He did try though.

Can you please ryt a second part as continuation? or maybe the same conversation from khushi's perspective?

-Gayathri

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

That was very beautiful and poetic in a way. 👏

I liked it a lot.

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

beautiful OS. loved it. I feel for arnav. He was being a shaitaan but with that he was also a rajkumar. I want khushi to be happy but i also cant see arnav sad and torn.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wonderfully written, Rae.. 🤗 Felt so bad for Arnav.. Even after putting Khushi thru so much, my heart goes out to him.. 🥺 He is equally hurt as her in this process of hurting her..

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

That was very nicely written! I really liked the dialogues you used, and I think the fact that he desperately wanted to return back to ASR, and remove Arnavji is what moved me the most.

Great work with this! And while some may say the ending was not satisfying, I loved it. It fit in well with the mood, the present situation and everything.

Finally Khushi returned every paisa. But what of the memories? Can she return them too? Will she have the courage to return them?

Loved it!

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

YOU MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH ARNAV ALL OVER AGAIN!
WOW!! I WANT ASR!! PLEASEEE FETCH ME AN ASR..lol m actually goin into a sad mood reading this..cz it was just SO SOO SOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!!