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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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Rae, What the...Hamara mann bas yeh kehne ka ho raha hai!

The way you were skeptical about this, I thought you were going to spring the script for today's episode on me :)

But this can never be what the show has become now. Because this is...

This was beautiful. First you started with one of my favorite songs. Absolute favorite

I loved what Arnav said, finally admitting a lot more than he has ever in the past, finally giving the thousands of actions and thoughts the words that love needs to live, to flourish, to endure.

It was brilliantly written. Poetic in your very own unique style.

I can see this happening on the show so easily. And Barun Sobti - the Arnav Singh Raizada we fell in love with, could so easily bring this to life.

If only, Rae. If only!

Could I make a greedy request - What would it take to do a Khushi's reaction follow up to this?

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ufff... beautiful... There just is no other word for this.. except beautiful...

My heart ached at the line where all his family members accepted he wasnt anything other than shaitan.. Uff i feel for Arnav..

The approach used to get her back... Now I cant even see any other way for getting her back.. yup.. Shrewd business is all Arnav is good at... And then why not it be put to the greatest use of all..

Extremely insanely heartwrenchingly beautiful!!

As I said already, there isnt another word in my dictionary..

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30
Res

Rae, What the...Hamara mann bas yeh kehne ka ho raha hai!

The way you were skeptical about this, I thought you were going to spring the script for today's episode on me :)

Lol! I dont think thats a compliment... 😉 😆

But this can never be what the show has become now. Because this is...

This was beautiful. First you started with one of my favorite songs. Absolute favorite

I just suddenly remembered this song and then the above just spilled out...

I loved what Arnav said, finally admitting a lot more than he has ever in the past, finally giving the thousands of actions and thoughts the words that love needs to live, to flourish, to endure.

It was brilliantly written. Poetic in your very own unique style.

*Bows*

I can see this happening on the show so easily. And Barun Sobti - the Arnav Singh Raizada we fell in love with, could so easily bring this to life.

Haina? I actually pictured him through it while writing...

If only, Rae. If only!

Could I make a greedy request - What would it take to do a Khushi's reaction follow up to this?

Lets see. :)

Thank You so much, Meera! :)

Means a lot to me! Specially considering I am writing an OS after so long. And I was actually really nervous about this one...but glad you liked it. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aria009hera
res

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ufff... beautiful... There just is no other word for this.. except beautiful...

My heart ached at the line where all his family members accepted he wasnt anything other than shaitan.. Uff i feel for Arnav..

The approach used to get her back... Now I cant even see any other way for getting her back.. yup.. Shrewd business is all Arnav is good at... And then why not it be put to the greatest use of all..

Extremely insanely heartwrenchingly beautiful!!

As I said already, there isnt another word in my dictionary..

Thank You so much! :)

This was not so much of a try to get Khushi back but to put it across in some way that he couldnt do without her...not as Arnav anyway...glad you liked it. :)

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

An OS from you..

Me happieee

I seriously want exactly the same reaction from Arnav. It does not suit him to beg.

I really loved how you described the last time Arnav met Khushi. I could seriously imagine it.

And I loved the way ASR said all those things to Khushi so he can become Shaitan again.

Totally loved the OS

It was totally

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Res :)

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Rae! *wipes tear*

This was so..so beautiful.

But I don't this happening in the show, I'm telling you I'll start crying if something like this happens.

Each & every word held a meaning. I always wanted to read something based on Arnav's feelings & today when I read this I had tears in my eyes!

Khushi deserves to be happy & so I think her decision was right.

But Arnav's pain was so perfectly described. I bow down Rae!

I love this song!

This was truly amazing

Keep writing!

Take care 🤗

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful!

I don't have any more words to add.

Let me just get fireworks to celebrate the death of Arnav Singh Raizada!

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Unknowingly tears came out while reading this. That was really heart touching. I somehow remembered the song "meri neend meri chain mujhe lautado..." from Hum Hain Rahe Pyar Ke. Anyway, that was just so well written by you.

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

I already love the song and the OS is a perfect rendition of the song in a story

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow Rae!! Rulane ke liye nikli thi na? Well, you've achieved it!! So Have you accepted that Script Writer Offer they gave you then? 😉 Beautiful Dialogues Hon!!

Oh God- Arnav!! So so sad! Rae Honey, I demand a second Part, in your amazing and unique style, where Khushi's POV during the phone call- or maybe her reaction after the phone call is described. Please. I beg you.

I'm actually on my knees in front of the lappy right now begging you to please please write it- because its only you that would be able to do complete justice to it! (That's what I feel!)

Oh, and I'm so sorry for being a horrible and irregular Reviewer, but I've been really busy shifting and all that- But I'll comment on all your works soon enough! 😃

Loads of Love!