REMOVED ~Give it back to me~ ArHi OS

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awww...it was so emotional yet wonderfully written!👏 Great job!👍🏼

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

That was fantastic Rae! Awsome! U got Arnav's feelings beautifully!

Loved it totally! Thanks for the PM!

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-PoisonIvy

@-PoisonIvy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I'm hearing this song for the first time and it definitely set the tone for the story to come. Your writing totally evoked emotions out of me for the characters! Materialistic things can be returned. What of the memories! A lovely idea and well executed! :)

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I loved ittt!!!! Thankyou for the pm!!

I will give a longer comment after august!!

Love,
V

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Wow, that was so intense and painful!
Beautifully written... if I get even half of this intensity in the show today,it would be wonderful.
Loved reading it...thanx for the pm😊

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

This is one of my absolute favourite songs.

I'm still hopeful scene like this would play out in the serial. It was poignant,throat constricting and beautiful. It'll be a delight to watch Sobti enact it.

When dreams shatter,the pieces prick you and you bleed. Arnav's facade of "It's okay Khushi" shattered and he bleeds here. I could seriously visualize this scene and tears sparkled in my eyes.

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Remember the time when I told you that you can make people immensely happy with your writing? Well, you can make them cry too :/ And it's not something every writer can do, move their audience to no end. Brilliant work Rae. *Bows*

All of it was so intense, my heart breaks for Arnav, all and everything he said to Khushi. It was a wonderful concept you chose to write on and you have done perfect justice to it:)

And this post, your writing brings out perfectly the vulnerable side to Arnav Singh Raizada. I can't tell you in enough words how beautifully you've brought out every emotion that was required from Arnav.

P.S. The song's beautiful!

P.P.S Like Meera asked, can we have a Khushi's side on this too?

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

...Beautiful!

Absolutely beautiful!Arnav pain was so well described ..i am touchd!

The entire phone conversation..where he was begging her to return hs laad governor-ness..👍🏼..al the memories perfectly recollectd...I am so much in aww of ur OS.

Can we have part2 for ths?plz..okay!if u can than cont.