REMOVED ~Give it back to me~ ArHi OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: shraddska

That was beautiful yet heart breaking...

Khushi's silence spoke more than her words and he understood it all

How wonderful...

Every special moment they shared together, he asked her to return...

I was a bit dazed when it ended and didnt realise that it had...

Leaves me wanting for more...

Is there a part two or just leaving it as an OS...😳

Originally posted by: mistyrains

Remember the time when I told you that you can make people immensely happy with your writing? Well, you can make them cry too :/ And it's not something every writer can do, move their audience to no end. Brilliant work Rae. *Bows*

All of it was so intense, my heart breaks for Arnav, all and everything he said to Khushi. It was a wonderful concept you chose to write on and you have done perfect justice to it:)

And this post, your writing brings out perfectly the vulnerable side to Arnav Singh Raizada. I can't tell you in enough words how beautifully you've brought out every emotion that was required from Arnav.

P.S. The song's beautiful!

P.P.S Like Meera asked, can we have a Khushi's side on this too?

This was so beautiful Rae...I have tears in my eyes...You portayed Arnav's situation so well..This is exactly how I want him to react..Instead of Begging Khushi to take him back..He should give her respect and the love she deserves 😊 You are a briliant writer and this OS is a testament to that ...Only the best writers can evoke such emotions in people..Thanks you so much for the OS and PM ...Can I be selfish and we please ask for a second part...Pretty please...I will even add chocolates on top 😉

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This was so beautifully written !!

The way you talk about Arnavji perishing out Arnav Singh Raizada !!
You are so damn good at writing out angsty things !!

Their whole convo over the phone !! I could cry out loud for god's sake !!
This was just the eptiome of perfction !! All the moments they ever shared put so wonderfully !!
I couldnt have even imagined it !! He wasnt asking for forgiveness, cause he knows he doesnt deserve it, and he cant ask for her either, and so he asks for all that they ever shared !!

So that he could turn back his heart, lock it up again and be the shaitaan , rakshaas he has always been !! So that he could kill the Arnavji, but just the opposite happened !! And how wonderfully you'd written that part !!

Gosh Rae !! I loved this part !! (I say part, cause somehow I feel I want to read another one to it)😳

Originally posted by: Jameelah52

Somehow while reading this, I felt tears stringing down my face! I dint even realize it! This was beautiful yet sad.

The way you've written it, is sooo extremely heart wrenching! The things he asked her back, ahh if only one could return those things!
He actually admitted alot more than he has ever before.

The line where he says he wants back his Laad- governor-ness, a fanit smile lit up because I immdiately recalled all the wonderful nok jhoks they had! Such beautiful memories!

You've captured the emotions bang on. If I want Arnav's regret I want it this way! Now even if the CV's dont show me this, I'll always remember this and say I got my redemption. :)

A beautiful work, Rae! I'm soo glad I got to read this. Thank you for writing this!

Beautifully written.👏

Originally posted by: smileyhug7679

Oh my osh u made me cry

Everything is blur on keyboard

So amazingly emotional... Wow man I wish our show was so good like this I am sure they will cme up with some stupid track

Pls send to the cvs we would love to see tis on screen enacted by our Barun

That will be a treat to watch so many emotions

OMG! That was heart wrenchingly beautiful. You have a way with words woman. Absolutely brilliant!

That was soo amazing heart- wrenching! xD :(
You have beautifully described his feelings, and i could absoultely relate with his feelings.
Arnav trying to battle it out between himself, trying to win her back!
'Arnav Singh Raizada had been perished by Arnavji': this one line describes everything! :D