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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it.. Awesome update.. Thank you dear.. She faced him so well.. I liked Arnav's discomfort on being cursed and being out of control..
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Posted: 13 years ago

I enjoyed this update to bits and pieces!


Before I say anything else, I completely agree with everyone else who has said this, I would LOVE for #7 to come true 😉☺️


Now, some lines I just aaddoorreddd:

"What sunshine… the weather looks like shit!"


"She had muttered 'ferret' while she passed by him. He had dropped his wine glass when heard her sudden 'endearment'."


"Who is missing…" --- Lavanya? So Khushi 'possibly' occupied the chair reserved for Lavanya..hmm.. Lol. I like that.


"Of all the people, he had to be seated with her. He just wanted to hang himself." --- Hah!


"...first contact ever"-- aww 😛


Three dances.. they danced three dances! Eeekk! So lost were they in their own rapture, own world that they kept on dancing! Loved that!


And THIS: *SWOON*

"This time, her scent hit his nostrils and calmed him slightly. Khushi stared into his eyes and saw his pupils dilate until the pools of eyes were completely black. She shuddered at the sudden proximity of his eyes, his face, and his breath... their breaths were getting mixed with each other."


Khushi name calling/cursing Arnav, the 3 dances and their close encounter made this update.. phenomenal 👏


Jolly well done! I can't wait to see what sort of prank/joke is going to be played on Arnav

Fantastic job, eagerly awaiting the next update!

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Posted: 13 years ago
it's osm update...
i love ur story...
plz update next part...
i m waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

He just motioned his head towards the sofa and chuckled at Akash's piercing scream. "Get up you bear," she screamed and continued, "I will not be marrying you in five days, if you don't get up this instant and help me."😆

"Payal, sweetheart, you won't have anyone to marry if you don't let me sleep, and I just don't mean it now… I mean all night long as well." Arnav's head shot up and he threw Payal an amused expression. She had turned beetroot red but now had resorted onto hitting Akash but for safe keeping, she clamped his mouth shut with her hand.🤣🤣


Lavanya has gone


Arnav is intrigued by Kushi 🥳

Fab update 👏 it was brilliant ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
I just re read Chap 11, kept laughing at the names Khushi called Arnav specially Ferrret!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 10 was fab. brilliant how could u not be happy with it?

chap 11 👏 wow, it was funny, intense & gripping

The list Kushi made to hit back on Arnav 🤣 i could not stop 😆


Arnav has lost control but so has Kushi opposites attract 😃


thank u for the pm's & 2 amazing updates xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved your update... and the interaction of Arnav and khushii... thank you for the posdt
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Posted: 13 years ago
m curious...why hv u named ur story PAST TENSE?
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update.
can't wait to read more.
please continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am one happy soul that you are updating frequently. I really, really love this FF. Alcohol cam do wonders .. Huh? Waiting for the next update!!

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