ArShi:Destiny With TRAILER Thread I - Page 43

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it,read your note too,👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think the story is moving on, characters are justified. In short, the sauce is purrfect in des-tuh-nee!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for the warm response regarding the note. I am bloody happy with the response. I am strictly making myself finish the next one by tonight (a few hours) and post it.

Ps- the name is now changed😊
Edited by chander992 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey this is an amazing ff...your writing is brilliant...plzz add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...i love this Khushi and GOSH how her behavior intrigues Arnav is WOW..FANTAMAZINGSOME!!!!!...LOVED IT TO NO LIMITS...UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

I tried my best to finish the update, heck, i didnt even get one page done. Apologies, my cousin is getting married tomorrow.. well in about 9 hours. I have been slightly busy with the wedding festivities, i planned on starting it yesterday, but i had to go to the mayian and came back after midnight. Today, i skipped the Jago, but i had tons to do at home and my mother dearest has me by my hair to get everything ready for tomorrow. Anyhow, i cannot promise an update till sunday but i could try writing some more after the gurudwara ceremony tomorrow. So, here is a slight preview (or what i have got so far) I have planned the next chapter to be strictly ArShi... so YAY😃

Take Care.

PS- keep commenting so i be the obnoxious person who is taking her phone out every few minutes to check the comments during the ceremony😆





He trailed down the hallway in a sleepy state still clad in his black silk pajamas and a red T-shirt. The night before was passed tossing and turning in guilt and remorse. What was he thinking? He still had no answer to it. However, he knew that he had to apologize to Khushi as much as he would abhor it. He was out of line. It was close to lunch time and Arnav cringed at the noises attacking his pounding head. "Shut up," he growled at the kid who happened to be Varun or was it Karan? He descended down the stairs in a tired gait. He felt like he had just run a marathon; his body screamed in agony as he reached the top of the main stairwell and finally slid into the plush sofa in the living room. "Get me some bloody water!!" he yelled while he put his head against the head rest and closed his eyes to stop the blazing pain in his eyes.

Then his ears picked up a faint sound of shrill music accompanied by a loud, obnoxious attempt at what he could comprehend as singing. As if other gleeful noises weren't puncturing his ears already, this horrible raspy voice was acting as the cherry on top. He took an exasperated sigh as he felt the couch next to him being occupied by someone; he heard loud shrill sound blasting out of the headphones. "You wanna know how to make me smile; Take control, own me just for the night; And if I share my secret; You're gonna have to keep it; Nobody else can see this…" Arnav's eyes were still glued shut; he had no energy in him to even move a muscle and he gritted his teeth as the obnoxious voice clearly wasn't shutting up. It continued, "So watch and learn; I won't show you twice; Head to toe, oooh baby rub me right…"

At the latter statement, Arnav snapped his eyes open and in his delirious state fumbled with his thoughts. What he saw next stumped him (that's right it is his turn to stumble and fumble ;) ) Khushi Kumari Gupta perched in the nearby seat, slightly panting and sweating in her loose white cotton shirt and green running shorts. Her foot shook in rhythm as she perched leg on top of other. She had no idea what she had uttered, or that pathetic attempt she would call singing. He was looking for a way to please her and apologize to her. It seemed like the gods of irony were mocking him, or giving him an opportunity. Her tied hair clung to her sweaty neck and Arnav felt a sudden need to push it away from her smooth neck to breathe in her familiar scent. She had her eyes closed while her head rested against the back of the sofa and continued, "I have got the moves like jagger," in the shrillest tone that he was jolted out of his sinful thoughts. His head pounded hard and he had been deprived of water till now. Where the heck is everyone, he mumbled. Khushi still continued to sing and he could not take the torture. He stood up with a slight head rush, strode over to her, held her by her upper shoulder and straightened her to stand on her toes. Khushi had no time to react because she was thinking of a certain hottie named Adam Levine; the next thing she discovered was glancing into pools of brown liquid. "Shut up!" he snarled and his lip curled in anger.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome teaser...

now im awaiting the update...EAGERLY ;)

and about ur note...THANKS ALOT HONEY...
i know how it feels to get the best comments being a writer myself... and i always stick up with the best and Different... so i definitely will be here for every single update... as the story mature's up coz u just got me hooked with its altogether alternate reality...

and reality is something im seeking right now in my own life instead of the dreams i had been in...
and wen u offer it so beautifully thru ur perfect to the point words... i can never keep myself away from here neither can i stop giving out the good comments...

i just love the way u have molded this story hon... a celebrity crush, crushed by the man itself changes the views regarding life for a 17 yr old girl... its something that happens in reality...
and finally the very celebrity meeting her again without even knowing the cruel part he played in destroying the innocent dreams of teen... its just DESTINY playing...
and i would love to see how this dice rolls and where the pieces are gonna end on this game of destiny... love ur work and love u too alot for acknowledging me hon...thanks alot

~~~ sam
Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love the Khushi's progression from a hormonal teenager to a strong adult. For a change, she is educated as well. Kudos!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh! Lol, I loved the preview!
Waking up in the morning to read a preview where our hottie is found clad inojs and a res shirt..ahh..no shirt wouldve been better ;p
And Khushi! Who knew she had such a horrible voice? Or does she..is this one of her plans to harass Arnav?
Update soon! Can't wait to see how the rest of the day proceeds :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Of course... The hottie adam levine :)

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