ArShi:Destiny With TRAILER Thread I - Page 39

control... hhmmm he no longer has it!!

awesome update...

update soon...

i liked the last scene wer she conversed with uncle n had a good time.

happy tht arnav has gained an interest in her.u hv put his inner thots beautifully.

also i loved the dialgue she said abt arnav to akahs in his front abt he cant do anything.tht was a good shot chander.

but i think story shud move forward n poor anjali,is not getting any time with kushi as kushi is so much in anger always.

the list at the begnning was lol.loved it.also loved the bonding u hv created bwn mami n kushi.its so cute n loving.

lemme ask u a qtn?what exaclt is the reason for kushi to be angry on arnav?i mean,yes he was a jerk wen she saw him tht night.but wasnt she the fool to believe the image he gave off b4 the meida.cudnt she understand tht it ws part of rich n media?ok,she was in her teens,but she has grown up now.so she shud think of the thing with maturity rite?i mean arnav was not her lover who cheated her.he was living his life the way he wanted.i do agree with her scar thing,it must hv hurted her heart.also the charity thing.but isnt she mature enough now to get over it?y is she so afraid of arnav ro find the courage aftr this chap incident.i dont get it.hate is reasonable,but anger y?does she feel for him still????

also loved how u put tht the old kushi was coming back n she was unaware.

also happy tht u'll update daily.im sooo happy.also i wish the story move ahead in the nxt chap👍🏼