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Posted: 13 years ago
yew r an awsumm writer yar 👏👏

luvd et 😊😊

i noe it's nt possible to update fast buh plzz try to update early 😳

waitng foh nxt chptr 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update!!
poor arnav!!he dont have even a idea why khushi is reacting like this!!oe rather we can say behave all weird!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Important authors note:
I am really glad that all of you are enjoying this story as much as i am while writing it. Having said that, there are certain common questions or statements that i have noticed when a i read the comments.
I read that one my reviewers asked why is Khushi reacting so with anger and that she should move on and that her emotions arent justified...

I would like to point out that firstly, I never made Khushi's character (and other characters) to feel to the book emotions... these characters have are justified to me because they display emotions like normal people would. Khushi is angry and upset simply because she had believed that there was goodness in Arnav and she had faith in him. He made her have faith in dreams. However, she was hurt and not just because she had a crush on him. She was hurt because her faith in him was shattered. She deserves the right to hate him.

Human beings react and cope with situations differently... so Khushi has chosen humor and anger as an outlet for those emotions. She is not created to be book perfect. She has serious flaws.
Yes, she did cope up and enjoyed her life for the past five years but you have to understand that she is as confused as ever right now. Granted that she had locked that part of herself in her mind but she never truly "moved on". She simply shut the lid on it and left it to the dust moths. She never thought she would ever see him again, let alone stand so close that she could practically be breathing in his breaths. Her confusion is all time high and so is anger because that is her outlet for this situation.
Anger is also her way of prevention. She is in self preservation mode where she does not want to deal with Arnav and the emotions that she, with a lot of effort, buried. She does not want to get hurt. She is going to feel anger and confusion.
She is merely 21... so she is going to act pre-maturely. About the incident on the stairs, Khushi found courage there because she faced him, and pushed him away from her not physically but somehow mentally as well.

Arnav on other hand is going to feel confusion but more so curiousity about Khushi. His sanity is being questioned here... he is bound to feel the pull. However, he is not going to instantly fall in love with her. And neither is she... she is habouring hatred and he is habouring things that will be revealed as the story progresses.

Anjali isnt getting any time with Khushi because this is Arnav and Khushi's story and she simply is the connection that brought them together. But, my story is about Arnav and Khushi.

When someone points out that this story isnt moving forward, i feel angry. I would really like to point out that i have already thought of the entire story before i even began penning it down. I am not weaving as i write; i have already decided on how exactly this story is going to go.
The story needs time to mature and develop and if someone is still thinking that it isnt moving forward, then i would suggest to not read it. Simple.

Now, i am glad that most of you are enjoying my story.❤️
I love all my reviewers but sam, avni... you are the best ones... you all just simply supportive and always write long sentences that i start reading with a smile and finish off with a huge grin! 😳😃

Lastly, i have been contemplating for the longest time and i have decided to change the name of this fic. When i had started writing it, i didnt care too much about the name but now i really dont like it. So, i have decided to name is Des-tuh-nee (if it wasnt different, it wouldnt be me😉).

Thank you to all my reviewers... i love you all! ❤️




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Posted: 13 years ago
No matter wat other say, ur FF is wonderful and we have come so far that its hard not get hooked!!😊

whoever says the story is not moving should be blind!!! and if u dont like simply dont read it!!😡
i just love ur writing... always stalking if u have updated!😉

love every bit of it... can see how khusi is trying to get her revenge in her "strange" way... i think its gonna royally piss arnav...

the hatred will be immense i guess... but nonetheless it will turn into something meaningful at the end!!

plzz keep the humor and the intensity intact... looking so much forward to it!!!

well done for the journey so far... and keep up the good work!!👏 👏
update soon... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
I was gone...so forgive my late reply! Love the arhi interaction, outfit descriptions, and quick updates!
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Posted: 13 years ago
God now u took my font,...not just in color but also in font and style...wow...how m i supposed to comment?????,...so my next best choice Pink ehehehe

Originally posted by: chander992

Important authors note:

I am really glad that all of you are enjoying this story as much as i am while writing it. Having said that, there are certain common questions or statements that i have noticed when a i read the comments.
I read that one my reviewers asked why is Khushi reacting so with anger and that she should move on and that her emotions arent justified...
These are all just Arnav Fans who dont treat Khushi as n individual but Arnav's puppet...so honeslty dont give head...😉

I would like to point out that firstly, I never made Khushi's character (and other characters) to feel to the book emotions... these characters have are justified to me because they display emotions like normal people would. Khushi is angry and upset simply because she had believed that there was goodness in Arnav and she had faith in him. He made her have faith in dreams. However, she was hurt and not just because she had a crush on him. She was hurt because her faith in him was shattered. She deserves the right to hate him.
Well thats exactly what makes ur story so much more realistic, magnetic, refreshing, in very interesting to read.
Khushi has every right to feel hurt and react the way she feels fit. She is and individual with her own thought process and dfntly a heart that once beat for Arnav: an ideal image she made in her mind and heart that was so brutally shattered. For cryin out loud she was a high school kid seening her first crush's image being shattered...if they dont understand the pain behind that,...then i dont know what they are reading for...

Human beings react and cope with situations differently... so Khushi has chosen humor and anger as an outlet for those emotions. She is not created to be book perfect. She has serious flaws.
Yes, she did cope up and enjoyed her life for the past five years but you have to understand that she is as confused as ever right now. Granted that she had locked that part of herself in her mind but she never truly "moved on". She simply shut the lid on it and left it to the dust moths. She never thought she would ever see him again, let alone stand so close that she could practically be breathing in his breaths. Her confusion is all time high and so is anger because that is her outlet for this situation.
well said sweetz...she ran away from the situation as far as she could go...not just the person but the place, ppl , friends, anything and everything that would dare remind her of the person and that night.
Anger is also her way of prevention. She is in self preservation mode where she does not want to deal with Arnav and the emotions that she, with a lot of effort, buried. She does not want to get hurt. She is going to feel anger and confusion.
She is merely 21... so she is going to act pre-maturely. About the incident on the stairs, Khushi found courage there because she faced him, and pushed him away from her not physically but somehow mentally as well.
She has only just begun to face her long stowed away demons. She not also facing the demons but also facing the long stored feeling that she never got chance to deal with,...or should i say never CHOOSE to deal with...cant blame her for behaving as best as she could in the given circimstances. If i may say so myself, i think shes holding up might FINE.

Arnav on other hand is going to feel confusion but more so curiousity about Khushi. His sanity is being questioned here... he is bound to feel the pull. However, he is not going to instantly fall in love with her. And neither is she... she is habouring hatred and he is habouring things that will be revealed as the story progresses.
Exactly...Why cant they seem to be happy that by doing whatever she is, she had piqued Arnav's curiousity. He is used to girl fluanting themselves on him...this is all new for him n will probably bring him to her.

Anjali isnt getting any time with Khushi because this is Arnav and Khushi's story and she simply is the connection that brought them together. But, my story is about Arnav and Khushi.
What time with Anjali, She herself is busy with her brother's wedding, new found date but still never fails to check up on Khushi...no probz there...they were seated together anyways...so whats the big deal yaar???

When someone points out that this story isnt moving forward, i feel angry. I would really like to point out that i have already thought of the entire story before i even began penning it down. I am not weaving as i write; i have already decided on how exactly this story is going to go.
The story needs time to mature and develop and if someone is still thinking that it isnt moving forward, then i would suggest to not read it. Simple.
That was probably the joke of the day...cuz for me its moved few years ahead...whoever complained probably isnt reading Past tense but is stuck in Past tense 🤣

Now, i am glad that most of you are enjoying my story.❤️
I love all my reviewers but sam, avni... you are the best ones... you all just simply supportive and always write long sentences that i start reading with a smile and finish off with a huge grin! 😳😃

DANCING WITH GLEE 🥳❤️🤗 is that my name up there?????

wow sweetz,...thnks yaar!!! didnt realize i made u feel that way...but i truly touched and honoured to have made u feel special.
U deserve it. 👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Lastly, i have been contemplating for the longest time and i have decided to change the name of this fic. When i had started writing it, i didnt care too much about the name but now i really dont like it. So, i have decided to name is Des-tuh-nee (if it wasnt different, it wouldnt be me😉).
⭐️ Des-tuh-nee ⭐️ indeed...thats how i met a great friend miles away on IF because of such a wonderful story on Ar-Hi...

Thank you to all my reviewers... i love you all! ❤️
Lub u too. ❤️

A note that deserves a bow. 👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by highonshows - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i like the new title
n once again i just love this story...its u who has created it so u can make anything out of it
arnav n khushi's charcter..der emotions feelings everything is admirable
i love reading ur story
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear...awesome update and loved reading it
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG its a long one =) =)
Superb update =)
I love the begining entry of Khushi's =) it's really cool =) =)
Awesome update dear =) =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just caught up with both the chapters, so off to commenting..

Ch 10: okay, so these two finally meet... Hmmm, Khushi's scars run deep eh?? I mean she still unconsciously puts her hand away whenever she sees him... I didn't think it affected her that much.. But apparently it was way more serious than I imagined... Her mind went haywire and her behaviour was very disturbing, it made me feel so sad for her, poor girl has had to go through so much to be normal again and now she is face-to-face with the same man who started it all...Her panic, anxiety, fear and terror were beautifully expressed... Could also see that she has definitely made a place for herself within the family... Also I'm glad that the truth about Anjali is now out... Great update, amazing portrayal of Khushi's feelings, Arnav's curiosity & confusion...


Ch 11: Amazing!!! I could totally see the old Khushi resurfacing here... It was there in her mutterings, her glares, her mischiefs, her need to be strong and look at the bright side... Loved the way you have described Akash & Payal's relationship, it's so much fun man!!! The whole family is so supportive and loving that I wanna give all of them a big hug!

Hmmm, so the two danced together for three sings huh??? I find it really sweet that she is lowly but surely taking over his thoughts, though it may be simply because she infuriates him but it's a start nonetheless... Oh my, the dress you described for Khushi was just so beautiful! Loved the update to bits!

Also thnx a ton for the PMs... the job has been keeping me busy henced the late comments.. By the way I love the new name of the FF!

take care and do continue soon dear
Edited by the_breeze - 13 years ago

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