Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!! - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
"Listen up you f**ked up old GOAT! Call me little girl one more time. ONE MORE TIME, and I'll make sure you have to deal with real littleness your whole f**king life"

"I will not hesitate to stuff your head up that tight ass of yours - although, I'm pretty sure there's a steel rod shoved up there already,"

"YOU have something to say? Well? Say it now. Go ahead. SAY it! Give me one excuse. One. So that I can rip out your tongue and wrap it around your throat in a neat little bow.
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Whoever wrote these lines, I bow to thee!

The direct quote in the whole of this FF have been outstanding, crisp, realistic, funny and full of emotion. I like the way you are building up this Kushi. Normally in most FFs Arnav is the one who has many layers to his personality and character, but in this FF so far Kushi has been the star.

Fanf**kingtastic update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
THIS WAS BRILLIANT! No one messes with Khushi Kumari Gupta either 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
tht was fab... y is arnav still treating her like a little girl
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Posted: 13 years ago
Everything was fine. For Now.
This line holds so much promise for the future. Wow!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, this ff had me hooked 4rm the first chapter and it somehow keeps gettin better and better.

Wat an update, don't throw tomatoes at me but wen I first started reading this chapter my reaction was nooo u left the last chapter on Khushi bein angry wit Arnav and ur now goin to torture me till the next update wit wat happened between them.

Anjali Shayam - he seems like a decent guy in this story, I was feeling so sorry 4Anjali she really wants a baby and he keeps sayin no until she gives up asking! She is writing secretly and satin money 4herself and the baby.

Arnav was able to mak it up to her easier than I thou. Oh I wud love to have seen the expressions on there faces wen she was threatening them - u go girl 👏 👏 so everything is right in their world 4now y do I think it won't b long b4 something else bones up. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Edited by sarra0 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice I Liked This Chapter. Shyam Is Horrible. Can't Stand Him In The Series Too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant !! I feel so bad for Anjali and Shyam - why doesnt he want kids? and how can she misunderstand his feelings for her.. gaah hope it gets cleared - though predicting her getting preggers and leaving before that happens..
lol Arnav and Khushi though - fabulous.. Loved the way you wrote they whole exchange with Warsi and Thakur - fantastic.. and Arnav walking into the restroom like he owns it - super..
Love this story so far!
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Posted: 13 years ago
its really good. keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahh I love the fiesty Khushi... the way she handled the chauvinists is awesome..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update loved Khushi she was really fierce and love how Arnav was behind her 100 percent

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