Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

I love LOVE this fic!

@Arnav-Khushi: I love their relationship. They are so close. Almost like an old married couple. I guess that is why Arnav doesn't realize his feelings for her, because he already has her in his life, why take the plunge and give that feeling a name? Only when he loses her will he see that he needs her

@Shyam-Anjali: My heart bleeds for them in this situation. 11 years and no communication. Just going through the motions. If only one or the other would talk and share something, anything. Shyam would have just held her silently that night and talked about his mother and then gone to bed. They both miss the depth in their relationship.

I am waiting to see where you take things. How will the couples come together? Will will the siblings find out the other is alive and reconcile?

Am waiting (im)patiently for more

Yuks

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

That was full packed update!

Starting with Anjali and Shyam...Married for 11 years yet still so distant from each other!

Loved the way all the angst and confusion between each other was portrayed!

Then coming to Arnav and Khushi...well Khushi just stole the spotlight today didnt she. She was fabulous!

The chapter was amazing! Continue soon :)

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Married for 11 years and they still yearn for each other yet are so distant!! The pain in Anjali and Shyams marriage seems so real!!!!

If I was in that restaurant and heard the rant Khushi said or more like screamed I would have applauded her!!!! The last line has me on edge... every thing is all right for now... which means something big is coming!!!! LOVED THE UPDATE!!!!!!!

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Arshibest

@Arshibest

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Loved it
Awesome update
2 update you made my day

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pere

@pere

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

First of all apologies for not commenting enough... I do read your story and its progressing really well\

Just got caught with university and then wedding coming up so really busy these days

Thanks for the constant pms on your update

Keep writing 👍🏼

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

anjali is one strong woman

hope she gets rid of shyam soon

men treating women just for the sake of physical needs don't deserve them

finally khushi gave it back to warsi-thakur

you rock khushi

awesome update

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Gargee and Bingala...superb updates.Had to take some time to read peacefully...as I so enjoy the detailing , be it fashion icons or the emotions which u both effortlessly bring in your story, very chic and so powerful.

I was cringing...and that kind of emotion u evoked in me.I felt devasted for Khushi.In her car, in her kitchen with her flowers.Oh Lord! That was terrible! Is Arnav so lost between the legs that he fails to understand how much he would be hurting this precious little girl?..who does so much for him.

What shade of Gray is Arnav residing in? What would make him love her back ferociously? What wld make his maker love tenderly and fiercely? What would make him have that rose play between her?What?

Yeah! I know...like many I am also very curious, restless and quite impatient...but I trust u guys...whenever it wld be unfolded we would be floored by the intensity:-)

Anjali and Shyam's interlude and Anj's secret plan was well potrayed.Why doesn't Shyam wants children?Anj should know, Shyam is a lawyer, he would smell it soon.

And the best was Khushi's knockout with The MCP's.That was a good smack Down!!!

A brilliant update, very fascinating.

Ash.

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

Juss read both updates...awesome update as usual...aww poor kushi she had seen arnav n aditi in that such a state...kushi should hav broken their head bcz they did mess up n dirty her heaven...i loved her outburst on tat warsi-thakur...bt arnav is really a lucky pig,idiot,ba****d...he should have ashamed bt noo kushi did nt say anything tat idiot...i really want a new man in her life...arnav is nt worth fr her love at this moment...may b thn he ll realize her importance n his love towards her...

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#379

I just read all the parts of this FF in one go. Have to say I am loving it. Both the relationships, Arnav-Khushi and Shyam-Anajli, are so different from anything I have read before. You have got me hooked!

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Mohini

@ChocoDamon

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#380

beautiful update!!!but i guess i will be a bit more glad if you give a slight clue where you are planning to take this story... i am not exactly getting the point!!!but the best part of your writing is you narration style and dialogues...pm me for updates!!!