Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

WOW!
Khushi you go girl!

Though I think she should still give Arnav some hell

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Roshni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Ok. First please don't take me off your buddy list. I love your stories.Second. I wish i didn't open this pm at work and that at lunch time. I read the fourth chapter and I was welling up thrying to avoid crying at work. How could he? That that 🤬🤬🤬🤬 piece of a man Arnav Singh Raizada. God for Khushi to witness what she had witnessed and what she had heard. Anyone would be heartbroken after that. Her to end up crying all night who can blame her.

Then in the morning that Adita had to be so 😡😡🤬🤬. Then for Arnav to be so casual. 😡 that man who the hell does he think he is.

I can understand Khushi taking the bus but to fumigate the car man I would have had it burned to the ground. As you can tell I'm really angry at this point.

Oh so then he realises what he has gone and done. Well boohoo to him. 🤬🤬

As I got the pm to read both chapters I somehow manged to read both of them.

Well chapter 5 Shyam what an ass he is. To not think that his wife is just content is an understatement. What is it with both Arnav and Shyam. They have the most amazing women in their lives and neither of them have aknowledged it yet. Well at least from the sounds of Anjali is doing something about it. I am glad she has a seperate account and she is thinking of divorcing him. Lets hope he doesn't find out.

As for Khushi. You go girl that was outstanding when she had a go at Warsi-thakur. Male chauvinistic pigs. Her outrage was brilliant. 👏👏

They so deserved it but the best line had to be " The bloody male chauvinistic pigs that is Warsi-Thakur and you will get along beautifully" that was fabulous. All afternoon I carried on thinking about these two chapters and it took all my self control not to cry at work. Then as i got into the car to head home put the radio on I heard Pardesi Pardesi from Raja Hindustani. Typical!

As soon as got home I ended up reading both chapters again and this time I did cry 😭😭😭😭

Please please please make both Arnav and Shyam pay big time. Please don't leave it like them being they are going to get away with breaking the hearts of the most amazing women.

As you tell I have made this post very long but it is thanks to your beautifully written FF that has made me feel this. Sorry If i have offended you. I didn't mean to but I really did cry with these two chapters feeling for both Anjali and Khushi.

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Isha

@gilmore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

just awesome part poor anji but also kushiii lets see whats coming up

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

am I supposed to like shyam? I'm really confused about his character. when you had introduced him earlier, in the beginning of that chapter I had thought I like him, however by the end I wasn't so sure on how I felt. and now this chapter, I'm just so confused, the way he admires anjali is no less than a lovers way to admire the queen of his heart, yet there's something missing in this equation! eleven years and the man still hasn't fallen in love with his wife or eleven years and the man still hasn't realized that he is in love with his wife? which one is it!
the way you both describe anjalis appearance makes her sound exquisite! she sounds Luke a beauty!

then there's arnav, I like how you've used the term "his girl" over and over in his thoughts! it doesn't really sound romantic it anything in that context but it just sounds so so homely, like family, like there's this special relation where she belongs to him.

khushi's briefing about what exactly she would do if those two buddhas said one more word was beyond hilarious! absolutely fantastic

cheers
Sonia

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Aarti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

i loved the update! khushi's reply was just amazing!!!!!!! 😊

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Caroline_arhi

@Caroline_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Amaaazzing<3

Cont soon<3

Thanks for the PM<3

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

For Now.

For some reasons these last few words scare me. LOL

But Arnav when are you going to realize you can't take Khushi for granted!?!

But OMG Khushi blowing up...that was the BEST RANT EVER!!!!!

LOVED THE UPDATE!

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mankhush

@mankhush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

U guys are absolutely brilliant

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Simran

@Sim1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

yaayy you guys updated! so happy! :D um though i'm quite shocked khushi let go of the matter quite quickly i wanted her to be a bit more angry and make him suffer more but its alrightt! whatever works best right? and you guys are superb writers, thank you for the pm 😊 and update soon!

Sim