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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone
Radihika

Dekha How good writer u r ... after reading so many comment

N then why u r saying that u can't write

So ... on now onwards , make OS as par ur convinience

but make dear

Really I like ur description , the way of writing n story too

so We are waiting for another OS 😍

lov u ⭐️

tc

first of all thank u...for this...😊

n secondly me too was thinking to write one more as everyone is saying that it's get too emotional...so i am thinking to write with a happy ending...😊

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wow...rtmc os !! yay !!

di u r a gr8 writer !!

just luvd it !!

i had tears in ma eyes !! n my voice got chockd up !!

soo... much feelng !!!!

luvd d whole story !!

dey a so cute !!!

d lines each oof dem usd 2 propose was really creative !!

but endng ne rula diya...

do write more !!

reallly njoyd readng it !!

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Hii ji 😊
ye ff sonali, rashu n priya k liye h ?
Priya bole to me ????
I think hmare grup me koi or priya nhi h 😕
to ye m hi hu 😃
thnku di
luv u 🤗
kina sona to likhti ho ap
suchi me ek dm mast
jakkas
bindas likha h di
jhuti di
mujhe likhna nhi ata
jhut bolti ho

bt di ek bat or
ye story mere liye rt ki nhi h
m use aise imagine nhi kr skti
kbhi nhi 😭
bhagwan na kre mere samne aisa ho 😭
apne emo kr diya mujhe 😭
bt m rt ko kbi imag ni kr skti
so ek bda wala sory
to ye koi or hoga
m btati hu
ye vo vampy actor hoga
uska naam rashu ne btaya tha mujhe
kya tha
ha vivan
to ye vivan tha
or baki bdiya tha
ab ek ff bhi chahiye di 😳
mna mat krna di
bachi ka dil tut jayega

Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Its really touching ridz..oops radhika.

From beginning till end you portrayed her emotions beautifully...the flashbacks and then present moments were mingled so apt.

Its very hard to forget a person who was so dear to you but ,they stay with us or not the beautiful moments spent with them always cherish us.

And that is what I liked in ur OS,she laughs remembering all sweet fights.Lovely...though at end I too felt sad for her...!

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

edited ma comment di

dil se likhe h...

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samantha1987200

@samantha1987200

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hi😊

Really enjoyed reading, its superb😊

Love

Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago

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piuli

@prahelika

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

very sorry for commenting so late ridz dear...

but there is no way i wanted to miss commenting here...

this OS actually touched my heart...

i'll thank rashu,priye and sonali for making you share it with us...

just brilliant work...and i did cried when i finished reading it...i don't use smileys when i get too much emotional and u can see it in this comment...

could it be more tragic for her than regretting for her whole life that a mere reckless behaviour of her costed the precious life of her beloved???

who new a silly fight over a red dress will cause her dedicating red flowers to the grave where the love of her life lay resting forever???

just one OS and you made me a big fan of yours...

plz write this kind of stories more...

luv u🤗

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

u r so talented...u made me cry..m crying like hell...now never ever dare to say that you are not writer else i have to stop writing in shame...😭

i am still visualising all that pain and grief

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

atlast read ur os!!
its awesome!! mindblowing n mindblogaling!!
loved their first meet!!
and he save her from tht guy (it reminded me prc)
and the way he proposed her was very beautiful
their convo was superb!!
their fights over blue & red were also cute!!
but y u ended it sad!! i m feeling like crying after reading it!!
and loved song lines u used at the end!!
so don't lie tht u r not good writer!!
and do keep writing such more! but not sad ending plz!1
thanks to sweetsanyo, sonali n all whom who insisted u to write😊

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago