Murat Love Chronicles By Radhika(Just One Shot)... - Page 3

Originally posted by: tejjo

res

let me tell u 1 thing that i love u 4 this baaki baad mein bolongi padne ke baad

ridzzi u make me cry today u know i never cried to read a story or ff
bt today i hv tears to read last part
that was shocking that he died

she missed him vry much...she celebrte 6 valentine without him

awesomesttt n vry touching story yr
i just can't say anything except that u r amazing

u said that u r not writer bt u wrote vry well u r awesome n superb

truely loved this update
loved the flashkback scenes,loved ur description,loved the songs u used
rabba ve is my fav also...

Ridzzi pls write more stories on rtmc bt not too emotional nhi to mein phir rone lagungi

cont soon with new story
thanks 4 pm,sharing n wrote a wonderful story

a hug from my side 4 u
luv u
muahhh

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Res

Ridziii ... u wrote OS ...Wow

Thanx yar!!

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Ridzzi

u write it very well

The concept n writting is so nice

Bot u know ... really I m crying when come to know that He is not in her life .

she was thinking about him ...remembering those sweet ... unforgattable memories

" Woh Lamhe "

u made me cry ...

How Badly she missing him

their memmories are so nice...

Their first meeting... Her saviour... his Proposer on valentines day

All are remain alive in her Memmories

Kash vo lamhe vahi Rukh jate na...

Kash ...

She was celebrating their sixt anniversary of proposal .

" hamare loved ones hume chod jate hai but vo humare Dil me Hamesha rehte hai

...ek live photo ki tarah... "

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😳reso jii

will comment very soon...

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thnx di for writing this for us...

specially me, aap sachi main hot accha likhte ho

apne mera dil jheet liya h,

ab aap kuch dinn aur indepence days banalo, phirr aapko ek ff likhne ke liye busy kr dongi

aap sachi bhot acha likhte ho di, sachi bahatareen...

yaad h voh jack ka titanic wala dialogue, wahi main aapke liye bolongi...

''bahatareen h madam!''

chalo ab os ki baari,

bhot emo. kr diya di aapne mujhe.

rt bro nhi rahe, he is no more, n she is celebrating their 6th proposal anni...

yahan yeh baat sabit hoti h,

''some love stories our beyond romance,''

mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi likhna h rtmc pr, dont wry usmain mc mer jati h, and rt uski death ka revenge leta h, bhot hi supernatural stroy h voh...

first flashback, by god rt ws damn cute flirter...

kinna cha flirt karta h,

he is loved to anoy her,

me to, meri mom ko, bhai ko, and saari IF ki di's ko...

second fleashback...

yeh, mugdha ka savior...

amazing..just so perfect...

3rd flashback...

god such cute proposal...

''so that i can show our children how their mom looks!''...

but mc ko kya pata tha ki use uss pic ki jarurat padegi ki dis is how ur father lokks.

lekin unki tho shadi bhi nhi hoi thi na...

verna mc at least rt k bache ke saath hi aapni saari jindagi guzaar deti..😭...

lovd this line-

'I have forgotten my surname,can I use yours???????''😳

ofcourse,

mugdha tokas...sunene main kitna perfect lagta h...😳...

but rt bro nhi rahe, kyun?????/😭

loved the stry like hell, sooperbo, mindblasting...

abhi main entrnce de loon, phirr ek ff likhne k liye bhi manogi...

lov u di.

thnx for writng it for me.

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

beautiful story..👏
it was too emotional in the end :)

Originally posted by: pranita1202

jhoooti jhooti jhooti "i m noot a writer "

then tel me wat the hell is written above that gave me goosebumps

just got tension free as tough paper is done rest can b tackled . so came to IF . saw inbox was flowing with rtmc ud but can't read any as i m lagging . coz once i get the taste of it . then toh

pura padh ke hi rehti hoon. but then u r message appeared on top of the list it said OS. so

checked , glad i did,

wat to say i m

i just loved it simplr gr8

u shou;d write more...

guess u shud make this os as ff

. if i may suggest u cud continue this with a PS ILOVE U touch that is lovely flashbacks n her struggle to move forward bit

as i m a selfish rtmc fan so want them together so u may then continue with doppelganger track

may b like kaho na pyyar hai with ps i love u touch.

or if time doesn't permit u shud b our official rt mc os writer n give us these lovey dovey treats.

last loved it , fab

want to read more n more ... frm u

finallly doing happy dance after long timr read rt mc stuff

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome os dear

its so poignant

such a tragic end to such a sweet love story.

Oh! I so hope no lovers meet such a fate.

Originally posted by: Freethinker

What can i say 😕...it wasn't good... It was excellent...loved it...i think you must start writing...Radhika it was simply awesome..well done...👏

It touched me...thanks for writing one and sharing...Superb update sweetie... 👏

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

yaar,...what i should say..

u made me cry...

that was really heart touching...

beautiful n emotional..

but simply brilliant..

do write more...but now want one with the happy ending..

thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: sparksfly

wow...rtmc os !! yay !!

di u r a gr8 writer !!

just luvd it !!

i had tears in ma eyes !! n my voice got chockd up !!

soo... much feelng !!!!

luvd d whole story !!

dey a so cute !!!

d lines each oof dem usd 2 propose was really creative !!

but endng ne rula diya...

do write more !!

reallly njoyd readng it !!

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

Hii ji 😊
ye ff sonali, rashu n priya k liye h ?
Priya bole to me ????
I think hmare grup me koi or priya nhi h 😕
to ye m hi hu 😃
thnku di
luv u 🤗
kina sona to likhti ho ap
suchi me ek dm mast
jakkas
bindas likha h di
jhuti di
mujhe likhna nhi ata
jhut bolti ho

bt di ek bat or
ye story mere liye rt ki nhi h
m use aise imagine nhi kr skti
kbhi nhi 😭
bhagwan na kre mere samne aisa ho 😭
apne emo kr diya mujhe 😭
bt m rt ko kbi imag ni kr skti
so ek bda wala sory
to ye koi or hoga
m btati hu
ye vo vampy actor hoga
uska naam rashu ne btaya tha mujhe
kya tha
ha vivan
to ye vivan tha
or baki bdiya tha
ab ek ff bhi chahiye di 😳
mna mat krna di
bachi ka dil tut jayega