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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

this was great! loved the ending of this. would of loved another part saying arnav's reaction to top it ff. brilliant

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
A fitting ending I would say. Sad though it is. Arnav presumed too much.

Coming to ur note, I don't actually think that Khushi has suicidal tendencies. The whole idea that she wanted to make life easier for him by removing herself from it instead of waiting for him to do it was ridiculous! As far as Arnav's self exile/kidnapping is concerned. I desperately hope that this is not the case.

Thanks for the PM! :)

I don't actually think Khushi is suicidal either but I hated that whole track of making her decision to commit suicide comical especially given that she hadn't acknowledged her love for Arnav at that point why would she put her family through so much pain just so the guy that she hates can get with his old girlfriend?

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HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Heart wrenching damnnn sad Im crying poor girll

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sur91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

That is the most shocking end I ever read seriously. Half way through it, I thought arnav is imagining it or khushi is pulling a prank but it was real and kudos to u for such a marvellous ending. Though I have a request also: please write another part giving out arnav's feelings coz I really wanna know how will he be able to live with himself and look at himself daily in the mirror knowing what he did to khushi. Call me sadist, but after his cowardly act, I wanna read abt he how lives with the guilt of khushi's death all his life

Edited by chillygirl - 13 years ago

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karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

bone-chilling

he didn't even see her body.. that's traumatising.( speaking from experience)

worse kind of guilt ever.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

You know as soon as I scrolled down and read when he came on and the pooja thing happening I instantly knew she killed herself. It was there in black and white. I felt so sorry for both of them, Before she went through all that and they didn't even spend any happy times with each other. The end bit where Khushi kills herself reminds me of Romeo and Juliet where she was unconscious and then he killed himself and then she woke up to see him dead and killed herself. I think Arnav's going to do the same. But wow I seriously applaud you Shue!!!👏

And to top it off she tried to kill herself before. He didn't even get to see her body. Omg for the first time I can say an ss has deeply touched me. The way you wrote it and the way he found out, it's just so saddening. What they could of had if he hadn't gone.

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago

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moonlight99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

This was a great story! I kind of expected the ending and was surprised when it actually turned out like that! It was a good story! Arnav completely brought this on to himself and this was a really cowardly act! Poor Khushi! Is she always going to pay for everyone else's mistakes and poor judgements!?

Thank you for the pm!

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

👏👏thanks..loved it...brillaint...👏👏

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Sona257

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Omg the end?? Kushi died.. It's really sad :'(

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LilaUK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#350

Wow how did I miss this ss? I can't believe you killed Khushi!! Well ok, I get the why, but still, that was cruel !! Beautifully written. And I loved the whole concept of the newspaper headlines. Arnav was a useless coward here :(