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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

Oh my days,Shuheda! I'm a bit gob smacked!...wasn't expecting that!...you have shocked me yet again with your unpredictability but I must say I really liked it though...this is something very different from you!Bit sad that that you had to kill Khushi off but actually loved this twist of your's.If this is all Arnav's doing, of him going missing then I sure will be disappointed as this it would be out of character for him lo leave his pregnant sister and the path clear for Shyam and Khushi to get close and even if he was kidnapped...who could be behind all this?
Could Shyam be the culprit?
Anyway another superb piece of writing by you!

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@khahani

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

When I read the first chapter I knew the story was heading this why ...how can a man make his family go through this much ordeal and simultaneously believe that he will just pick up where he left off ...

And is Khushi his personal mandir ka ghantaa...jab chahe baja dia..if he has kidnapped himself in the show then oh boy that would be a low blow even by his standard...

I want to read more angst Shu (i have just shortened your name without your permission ...ASR is a bad influence 😆)

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Just speechless man…such a tragic ending😭

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

oh i loved the story and ending tooo. Yeah ASR has been coward from the begining.

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Gave me goosebumps!

I understand your perspective.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

omg i was mentally cursing u when i read the ending ...but after the note i toats agree wiv u and asr shuld not kidnap himself ...if he did y leave his phone for shaym ...

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

OMG she died !! 🥺 Gotta say this part was tough on me. Still, really enjoyed reading it. Great work 😳

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Very sad ending...poor khushi 😭
Feeling very bad for arnav too

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-monalisa-

@-monalisa-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

At the risk of sounding smug, I'll go ahead and say that I wasn't expecting a happy ending. The tone of your SS was very light-hearted and having come to know how you write, I knew something was up! Superbly written, as usual!! 👏

I hIghly doubt that Arnav has engineered his disappearance -mostly going by his concern for Anjali.

As for the whole rooftop suicide bit, I really didn't know what to think of it. Khushi seemed serious enough, but her entire reasoning was so laughable, it was truly a strange sequence.