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Targaryen

@Targaryen

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

OMG this is really really heart wrenching at the end 😒

I admit throughout the entire SS I wanted kick Arnav really hard on his butt. He was such a coward!! I really am against this 'self kidnapping' in the real show!! would ruin the entire Arnav image for me 😳

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

I so did not expect that !!!!!!! She died !!!! 😭
That was a really sad end to an awesome SS !!!!!!
Felt a little bad for arnav !!!!!!!
Loved this SS !!!!!
Thnx for the pm !!!!!

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Anaya S.S

@nabnab

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

yikes...

Nayika...I'm sure most people are going to be unhappy with the ending, but having read your note...to be perfectly honest, it's a wake-up call...

If they make the story-line so that he got himself kidnapped and left his family to deal with all that shit than I agree with you, that makes him a total coward...

With regards to Khushi's suicidal attempts, I think the makers tried to make it comic and serious at the same time to serve the dramatic purpose of forcing ASR to tell her the truth. That he then left her there, with news that could very well make her suicidal again is shocking but, he probably left simply so the CVs could show her heartbreak and his anger.

It seems stupid to me that he would up and leave cos surely that gives Shyam and Khushi the chance to get together behind his back...but you never know with these shows...they make it up as they go along, overlook things and mould the characters to suit whatever's the current story-line:P

Anyway, rant aside, another brilliant piece of writing from you...with a powerful ending

Anaya x

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

well, Arnav at least got a hug from OP!

what an ending!!!

i was not expecting her to die!!!

overall i LOVED the SS!!!

it was a really different concept which is why i liked it!

i know this was the last part but can you do another part from Arnav's POV showing how he feels about Khushi's death and how he regrets his actions?

you know to sum it all up!

thanks a lot for the pm!

Edited by zoey_1365 - 13 years ago

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shilpa

@agshilpa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

i am shocked with the ending. but have recovered now. feel sad both for arnav and more so for khushi.

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

SHOCKING!!! drifting away from what you feel im quite content with the way you've ended this SS... ASR deserves to burn in hell, the way he will knowing that hes responsible for khushis death!

agree with your theory of suicide prone people! they are emotionally sensitive and prone to slipping into depression, further which they can attempt to kill themselves again... though it has been given a comical angle where khushi thinks arnav wants to kill her and decides to do it herself, the decision of taking ones life comes from acute depression and hopelessness!

arnavs insenstivity to khushi has left a bad taste in my mouth too!!!

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

omg...what a twist...i couldnt fantom it..khushi dead..wowww...as much as i love happy ending this one was a good ending for this story..bc now arnav will have to live with the guilt of knwing how his one coward step took her life..:)

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

shite! read ur note.

now i know y that content expression on her face bothered me back then.

about to read ur update now.

bone-chilling i'd expect

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#339

hate the ending but understood your pov

awesome well written perfectly done she could not live with out him and he could not live with her asr is the responsible all it would have took was one call awesome thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#340

A fitting ending I would say. Sad though it is. Arnav presumed too much.

Coming to ur note, I don't actually think that Khushi has suicidal tendencies. The whole idea that she wanted to make life easier for him by removing herself from it instead of waiting for him to do it was ridiculous! As far as Arnav's self exile/kidnapping is concerned. I desperately hope that this is not the case.

Thanks for the PM! :)