ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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Tia.0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

The turmoil they are feeling inside their heart is so heart wrenching...

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velangini

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

tht was just simply awesome

emotions were described in such a way that iam picturising the scene in my mind

great ff meera

contonue soon

thanks for pm

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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Beautiful...I loved the concept...You have captured their emotions so beautifully...

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devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

I can feel both their anguish.Very nice start,please update soon.

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indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

thank u 4 continuing! loved it!

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nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

well...meera...by reading prologue I have different thoughts but u made it in an entirely different way...I think the love is brimming between them...love to see more updates...
CheerZzz...for ur work...

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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

this is brilliant meera...just what i want to see on screen...i dont want a screaming screeching khushi..i dont want a grovelling arnav...i want palpable emotional conflict! which you dished out perfectly!