ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#991

Love it Meera ! :D
Lovely chapter... heart touching with tons of realizations and confusions of the 'real Arnav'...

Lovin' how your FF is building up ! Simply amazing .. can't wait for more Khushi Arnav scenes !

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#992

Hey Meera!

Sorry for the late reply! I was too tired last night, sorry again!

I loved the flashback scene, I mentioned this before, but for some reason the way you present them, the words, their thoughts, makes it exciting, more emotional, for me. Even though I know what's going to happen, I still am eager to read!

I loved the flashback with babuji, he really is Khushi's babuji. He stood by her through everything, trusted her.

Arnav is redeeming. He is trying to make up for what he did. He cared even before, but now he's showing his emotions and being vulnerable, which is hard for him, and khushi is seeing that, but the past is holding her back from taking that step with him. She is afraid to fall because she isn't sure if he'd catch her.

Loved it :D

Update soon :)

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#993

Amazing!

Mind-Blowing!!

Fantastic!!

👏

Meera, Take a bow dear friend!!

Loved It!!❤️

Update Soon!!😊

Waiting For Your PM,

.aNaMiKa.😍

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cupcake-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#994

Loved the update as usual Meera! And idea behind 'Amber' was fabulous! Totally symbolic of Khushi's situation!

This chapter delved into Khushi's past.. Her equation with her father and lastly her realisation of her unspoken feelings for Arnav inspite of him treating her badly... Superb!

As usual awaiting your next update.. and sorry for this late comment.. had a busy weekend.. :) And thanks for the pm!

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rima

@rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#995

hmm I am a late joinee. but I enjoy your style of writing. will complete the story and comment more. just started reading

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@Javeria_Xx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#996

OMG...

This is sooo Heart Touching😭

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

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Posted: 13 years ago

#997

read 1st 3 chapters n its brilliant..

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#998

Beautifully penned. 👏

Brilliant emotive description and so very in character. Do continue writing. 😊

Please PM me when you update.

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#999

I just started reading Colours of the wind. Been reading all the chapters in one breath. Loved loved LOVED this chapter. 👏 😛 It brought tears to my eyes. 😭 Brilliant stuff. Keep writing and PM me when you update.

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