ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written.

Just hoping that Khushi and Arnav show the same maturity while dealing with their lack of trust in each other

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written. Please contnue it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was just fab!!! loved the way u have penned it down!!!😊
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I like the way you write
it is simple and straight forward rather than having many descriptions about the surrounding you directly come to the point :)
very well done loved it :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Although I am pissed at not being told about this, I shall disregard those feelings for a moment and focus on the story.

Miss Author, you better turn this into a FF because it has started off on the note I want the frickin show to reach already!

The pacing of the story, the growth of the characters in the terms of them reflecting on things after the initial hurt and shock has been penned down beautifully.

The words are powerful as our the images. Great job.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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extremely well written!

u brought out the emotions of pain,desperation really well a sort of realisation that dawned on khusi!

i liked the way u kept ur os with a touch of realism...plzz continue and turn it into ff/ss!

khusi's pov was beautifully written!

poor khusi...my heart goes out to her😒

i loved the way you made her stand showing her strong willed,focussed and adamant and her coming to a conclusion!

do pm meeh!:D:D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautiful...please continue.. It would be great if U send me a pm if U plan to write more!!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mature n Subtle Writing n I'm simply bowled over by yur writing skills... The whole reading experiance of this OS was simply emotional, sad yet serene in a way... Brilliant!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do me a favour. Give this to the CVs pls. Loved it :-)

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